ehhh man, try to be more creative, the lines seemed bland and boring, and played for that matter, i dunno man, just read stuff and get a feel of whats been used already and try to avoid using those lines in your pieces, but keep up man... had some ok shit here and there but i wasnt feeling this for the most part

stay up.

well maybe cuz you dont know whats good and what isnt....but its alright alot of new cats to RV always think they know what they're talkin about