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Old 07-15-05, 02:28 PM   #1
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established lyrical threats ft opt1k, lyrical mage and knaledg1

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yo just re-openin this shit. i dunno why the fuck bone collector closed this.

Established Lyrical Threats

Opt1k
i be droppin lyrics like pigeons be shittin
ghetto musik turn up,the point is what u missin
this is ill rappers all together makin a hot song.
been through it all fromm 1999-2001
ive been shot,stabbed robbed and saked,
but take a look at this nigga bitch i keep comin back
cuz there aint NO WAY in the world i'll fall
so as ya niggaz keep penetratin i be fukin ur bitchez.
niggaz be actin all hard till i step leave wit stitchez
cuz everybody do thangz homie i run my block
our will be heard whether ya love it or not
nigga front the musik bitch i'll have ya ass shot
cuz our lyrics kill mc's,are beatz be breakin speaker wattz
see nigga in the back round,bitchez dont know how i roll
so mic tell maj and knaledg we’re ready to go WHOA!!!


One mic
Yo man, opt1k, im glad you passed me the mic
Im glad to spit, and im glad to recite
You spit dopeness, we cumin to leave emcees hopeless
Never fallin off the subject we always focused
Man we always got the “knaledg” for this
Why the fuck would you not be coppin my shit
Rockin the mic, act bad holdin a glock wen I write
Blow your mind, but you still won’t have forgot that I’m nice
don’t step to me, if you aint ready for work
Y’all know that I was just clearly deadly from birth
Wreckin this verse, for you haters, I aint gone let you disperse
We aint gone get physical we reppin with words
y’all haters actin ill when you a disaster case
if you want to be welcomed back, don’t bother askin Mase
I don’t care what you say im still gon’ trash the place
So, its gon’ be “a long hot summer” like im Masta Ace
I just cock back, fire, then release my grip
Everybody gets shocked, like hearin Jesus spit
Yo mage, c’mon cast a spell on these bitches
I need a rest, so I can chill, and concentrate on my figures!


Lyrical mage
yo my lyrics are killer like I made a deal wit the prince of pain
Even when it rains, I still have enough energy to send down flames
And even if I die my lyrical soul will still dish out nightmarish rhymes
Its crazy when they find a dead body but don’t know who to blame for the crime
I sit here slow as molasses writing freestyles while time passes And after a battle I always rise up like a phoenix from its ashes
Im a straight killa wit most of my battles ending in a real tragedy
I beat a dude so bad they gave him therapy to bring him back to reality
Theres a lesson learned not to boggle a respected lyrical master
Cause I come through and leave like a hurricane disaster
Still a beginner but great for my time you know
But after a year you’ll know this master flow

Knaledg1
I'ma lyrical threat, a vet who make cats sweat,
Any emcee test me best turn around and jet,
'Cuz I ain't done yet, I'm hea to inject checkmate
On you muthfuckas and leave y'all wet,
Hea I go ready to blow like a lethal weapon,
I'll knock yer' ass out like a game of Tekken,
And I'm wreckin' all ya cats b'fo you even expect it,
Call tha U.N. bitch.... so they can inspect it,
Fo' 8 years I've been forcin' fear into my foes,
They can feel it from they toes way down to their soul,
I stay writin' and recitin' 'til I'm a thousand years old,
Grampa Joe's even gotta admit that I'm dope,
So why tha fuck you pussies luv to push me,
'Til I let loose wit' my verbal uzi,
I day walk like Wesley Snipes hittin' tha pipe,
When night falls nigga.. I'm ready to fight,
Everybody raise yer' blunts and take one toke,
Just like a ninja son I vanish in smoke.
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Old 07-15-05, 02:33 PM   #2
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Old 07-15-05, 04:10 PM   #3
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Old 07-16-05, 05:40 AM   #4
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uppin, lets get sum feeback on this...............
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Old 07-16-05, 06:35 AM   #5
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i'm gonna keep it real cos you my fam

ok this wasn't the hottest piece i think you lot should have stepped your game up and really showcased your skills in this piece.

one mic i personally thought your verse was the best in this piece

all of you need to up your vocab a bit more and come harder with your punches.

but this was an ok piece

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Old 07-16-05, 06:36 AM   #6
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thanx for the feedback man, appreciate it. uppin...
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Old 07-16-05, 12:00 PM   #7
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uppin yall get this going
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Old 07-16-05, 01:41 PM   #8
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yer, c'mon people lets get the feedback comin in...
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Old 07-17-05, 09:05 AM   #9
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Old 07-17-05, 02:40 PM   #10
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Old 07-17-05, 02:56 PM   #11
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Old 07-18-05, 01:43 PM   #12
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uppin this shit...
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Old 07-19-05, 01:44 PM   #13
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uppin this shit, c'mon people lets get sum feedback on this....... i'll defo' rtf
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Old 07-20-05, 05:25 PM   #14
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i don't care if u say its wack, jus' let us know wot u think.......
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Old 07-22-05, 11:39 AM   #15
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