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Old 07-20-05, 11:34 AM   #1
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Exclamation Dispatchin all the drama

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ayo check this homies rate it..........

ayo...sit up to catch my breathe as i'm on my bed
go freshin my personal hygiene,grab a beer 2 clear my head.
early in the mornin wakin up to make a livin
makin music,go to work,go to the club deep sea fishin
assumptions bein made homie ur bitch came to me
she said she feel my vibe and i'm killin em softly.
so before your ass goes talkin ima be the better man.
and walk away from this childplay not cuz i want 2 but i can.
plus she was just out for a better dick lookin for a one night stand.
hold the weight of pressure on my shoulder death grip in my hand.
dreams within a reach seems to be meant for an illusion.
cuz the gifts that god has givin you take in and start abusin.
seize life's oppertunities death fell upon me, ive seen the other side.
was dead for 5 minutes all i remember was white light.
couldnt seem to catch amy breathe like i was loosin my voice.
god rejectin me so satan was the obvious choice.
loosin my touch ya fuckers can keep talkin and laugh
but let me see u battle TOPICAL ill kick ur ass
when i came back from my death i was scared of myself.
couldnt look in the mirror bad images burnin through my cells.
rage poppin,anger flarin dare devil mother fucka.
you aint gotta move a muscle papi here is a tru hustla.
being famous is hard but bein you is just better
dispatchin all the drama,mc's past,present,future peace out,the go getter.
many bitchez talk thinkin they know me shit nigga ragz 2 richez
niggas be all bitchez bout simple things step up u leave wit stitchez.
credit bein givin to my babygirl named caitlin who changed my world
scared at first but took reponsiblity in my hands for my only baby gurl!!!!
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Old 07-20-05, 11:35 AM   #2
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just a real quick one with my thoughts in yea homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1uppin this shit
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Old 07-20-05, 11:41 AM   #3
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Old 07-20-05, 11:52 AM   #4
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Old 07-20-05, 08:48 PM   #7
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wat ever you want homie i'll be down cuz i need to stay elevatin................
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Old 07-20-05, 08:49 PM   #8
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but you set it up i aint got credits
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Old 07-20-05, 08:58 PM   #10
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nah im a topical MC just gimme a topic and ill put them thoughts to a melody homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but you gotta read the words out cuz to you it may not rhyme...
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Old 07-20-05, 09:13 PM   #12
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o dont write homie i make it all up right on the spot homie so just set it up and when it comes then it somes
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Old 07-20-05, 09:22 PM   #14
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nah you go head and write but me im a freestyla i look up there previous battles see there weakness and get on em......i just dont pre write homie only songs that i make or a topical only though but for most of my shit never pre wrote........like my last three battles i didnt pre wtire homie all freestyles of my life
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Old 07-20-05, 10:06 PM   #15
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This was okay could of been better but I like how your determined to elevate cause practice makes perfect but the structure fucked me up to and flow was shackey but you gone do okay this gets a 6/10 rtf in "How Its Going Down" thanxx
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