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Pen N' Paper 1 16.67%
Nostradamus 5 83.33%
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Old 07-26-05, 07:38 AM   #16
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Old 07-26-05, 10:06 AM   #17
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Old 07-26-05, 12:36 PM   #18
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Voted For: Nostradamus

Sixth - You had good emotion in yours, good imagery...I was feeling it.
Nostra - Wow. "Secret Wars" by The Last Emperor, is one of my favorite underground tracks. This was really reminiscent of it. It was also quite humerous at parts.

Sixth had a good story, but the fact that Nostra was able to take a topic as serious as war and just make it funny...well that takes the cake in my book.

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Old 07-26-05, 01:25 PM   #19
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aight then more votes here...........plz more votes.........
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Old 07-26-05, 04:31 PM   #20
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uppppppppppppppplike always uppppppppppppppppppppp.............
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Old 07-26-05, 06:24 PM   #21
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third time trying to vote on this shit... i shoudla saved my last 2 ones i thought sixth sense took this.. overalll i thought he had a better message in his and he reallly set it off with alot better emotion the vocab on both sides was nice. but i thought nos sorta strayed from the overall topic . on a structure sense nos took it.. i liked having a visual aspect but overall i thought you lacked in the personal application part.... sixthsense really stole it with his message i could feel the emotion.

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Old 07-26-05, 08:39 PM   #22
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ok thnx for votin any more votes plz uppin this.........
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Old 07-26-05, 08:43 PM   #23
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Whoa...dope Nos.....................................
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Old 07-26-05, 11:20 PM   #24
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good battle by both...Nos....I loved your creativity..you OWNED the topic....you went completely left field an ended it wit a very enjoyable piece.....it was asimplistic at times but it wasn't a serious piece so its kinda hard to fault you for that....however ya rhyme scheme was nice...good struture you flowed off the pics nicely....I liked this piece the overall creativity was great

Pen....you had a strong piece too, really Nos jus outdid in the creativity cateogory...you spit somethign expected....I figured one of you would spit an introspective tale like yours...but you flowed good...structure good..you piece was good...it jus simple got outdid...thats really all I cna say...cuz u def woulda won wit dat in most cases....but creativity an originality always wins in my book so much props to both yall but I'm a give to.......

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Old 07-27-05, 02:18 AM   #25
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Nos-

this is original as fuck. The imagery is absolutly astounding.(pictures kinda helped) metaphores are solid thru this.This has got an insain fantasy feel to it.

Pen n paper- I liekd your peice but the originality got outshined. You still came strong with your verse but it got kinda boring thru out it. you lyrics are solid and probley had one up on nos with them, but content originality and imagery just dont match up slightly.


good solid battle.

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Old 07-27-05, 02:26 AM   #26
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Lmao, well, this was different to say the least.

Pen:
Serious approach, decent emotion. However, I felt your wording was kinda bad. You also had unneeded metaphors, like you were trying to complicate things for no reason. Flow was fine, but I didn't like your piece that much. Not a ton of originality, but it was a different view, but not that different. If you had tried to see it from the dictator's point of view, it may have been able to win. But the originality was just too low, and the wording was blah.

Nos:
Lmfao, wow. Now see I always though Gandalf would kick Yoda's ass. Anyway, very original idea here. I liked the spin on the topic. Your verse was good, rhyme scheme stayed consistant, and the times it changed helped the flow. I wish it could have gone on, good job man. Nice to see originality still alive.

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