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Old 07-26-05, 10:38 AM   #1
American Tiger
I eat kitty's for lunch.
 
From: Richmond
Wayne vs CarsonJet

IP: D666 722A

8 Bars
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Old 07-26-05, 10:41 AM   #2
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Wayne has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 10:41 AM.
 
Old 07-26-05, 10:52 AM   #3
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CarsonJet has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 10:52 AM.
 
Old 07-26-05, 11:08 AM   #4
*Nice*
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From: The D
IP: 3631 0E72

Im fuckin you pussies up so say goodBYE~TO~VIRGINTY/
I'll make you fags LIE~IN~VICINTIES for the dead until the end of TIME~AND~INFINITY/(Vicinity means a place, area)
Ain't no way ya'll can fuck with the Seraph RHYMIN~ABILITY/
So go ahead and take a TRY~AT~JUST~KILLING~ME/
It doesn't matter cause i know i'll be RESSURECTED/
Cause I always "live" for havoc and my crew's FOREVER~HECTIC/
We more "precise with spits" than a PHORENSICS~TEAM/(phorensics teams sometime use DNA from "spit" to find out who a murderer is at a crime scene, so they're "precise with spits")
We the BEST~REGIME so to mess with us results in INCESSANT~SCREAMS/(incessant means constant, nonstop)
Now sleep from the bullets of my M16/
Take a "dirt nap" bitches and have some PLEASANT~DREAMS/(haha)

Vote fairly and provide an explanation. No h8 ya'll.
 
Old 07-26-05, 11:41 AM   #5
American Tiger
I eat kitty's for lunch.
 
From: Richmond
IP: D666 722A

Wayne wanted 8 bars,But I think he meants lines.
Cus, By the time I hit four, The victory's mine.
Re-Wind, and realize,.Yeh...He was that herb Yung Wun.
It's like we all got Spur's way he's gettin Piss't-On.

Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
Can't reach, waynes beat.........................
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more played wordplay.

Some one help this herb........Tell em CAP'S dont MERK-
He's got more LETTER's in his line's than a fuckin MAIL CLERK
Steel' your vision, witta set........sold only at Sear's
Waynes got more wood in his ear's than santa's ReignDeer
A dope for sure. I'm glad to adopt the fact that your wack
Wayne couldn't spit Back if we gave him Eight Traxx-(old tapes)

C-B-4 I finish, let me administ the damage,
Re-asses all costs....
And call Red-Cross....
This kid couldn't spit fire if I slipped him Hot Sauce.
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Old 07-26-05, 12:47 PM   #6
*Nice*
Banned: Biting
 
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From: The D
IP: 3631 0E72

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp pppppppppppppin

and you went over the limit
 
Old 07-26-05, 03:34 PM   #7
American Tiger
I eat kitty's for lunch.
 
From: Richmond
IP: CFCF ED6A

Nope....I counted 8 bars silly,
It just aint in the format you know of.

UPPIN.
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Old 07-26-05, 04:22 PM   #8
Spoken Word
Still The Dopest Alive
 
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From: NY State Of Mind
IP: 3240 794D

Voted For: CarsonJet

CarsonJet:

Wayne wanted 8 bars,But I think he meants lines.
Cus, By the time I hit four, The victory's mine.
^^ehh 2/10
Re-Wind, and realize,.Yeh...He was that herb Yung Wun.
It's like we all got Spur's way he's gettin Piss't-On.
^^good bar 7/10
Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
Can't reach, waynes beat.........................
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
^^ehh 3/10
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more played wordplay.
^^ehh 1/10
Some one help this herb........Tell em CAP'S dont MERK-
He's got more LETTER's in his line's than a fuckin MAIL CLERK
^^decent 4/10
Steel' your vision, witta set........sold only at Sear's
Waynes got more wood in his ear's than santa's ReignDeer
^^decent 4/10
A dope for sure. I'm glad to adopt the fact that your wack
Wayne couldn't spit Back if we gave him Eight Traxx-(old tapes)
^^decent 5/10
C-B-4 I finish, let me administ the damage,
Re-asses all costs....
And call Red-Cross....
This kid couldn't spit fire if I slipped him Hot Sauce.
^^decent closer 6/10

Overall: 32/80 (40%)

Wayne:

Im fuckin you pussies up so say goodBYE~TO~VIRGINTY/
I'll make you fags LIE~IN~VICINTIES for the dead until the end of TIME~AND~INFINITY/(Vicinity means a place, area)
^^decent opener 4/10
Ain't no way ya'll can fuck with the Seraph RHYMIN~ABILITY/
So go ahead and take a TRY~AT~JUST~KILLING~ME/
^^filler 0/10
It doesn't matter cause i know i'll be RESSURECTED/
Cause I always "live" for havoc and my crew's FOREVER~HECTIC/
^^more filler 1/10
We more "precise with spits" than a PHORENSICS~TEAM/(phorensics teams sometime use DNA from "spit" to find out who a murderer is at a crime scene, so they're "precise with spits")
We the BEST~REGIME so to mess with us results in INCESSANT~SCREAMS/(incessant means constant, nonstop)
^^decent 3/10
Now sleep from the bullets of my M16/
Take a "dirt nap" bitches and have some PLEASANT~DREAMS
^^ok 3/10

Overall: 11/50 (22%)

Your verse was basically all filler

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Old 07-26-05, 05:06 PM   #9
American Tiger
I eat kitty's for lunch.
 
From: Richmond
IP: CFCF ED6A

lmao....

My good bars got less points than my bad bar's.
Text battles have really gone to shit.
I think its just that kids dont know how to battle any more.
So....How would they know how to vote? Exactly....
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Old 07-26-05, 09:18 PM   #11
American Tiger
I eat kitty's for lunch.
 
From: Richmond
IP: 9E28 7E88

another moron in need of education.
Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
Can't reach, waynes beat0/10 THATS NOT THE BAR
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more played wordplay0/10 THATS NOT THE BAR

Shit's deep, packed meat.........................
waynes gettin more dick than 10 chick's at madi gras
THATS A LINE
Can't reach, waynes beat0/10
Kick'em off his stool an show him gravity's a law
THATS A LINE
It's unreal in a way, I think wayne's gone gay.
This bitch actually plays more wit played wordplay0/10
THATS A BAR
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Old 07-27-05, 09:20 AM   #12
American Tiger
I eat kitty's for lunch.
 
From: Richmond
IP: A3F1 878A

Uppin. I promise I wont vote on your battle. If you vote here.
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Old 07-27-05, 04:27 PM   #13
MaRVJay
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
 
From: NyC,QUeENS EaRLy!
This was feedback posted for Wayne

IP: 0825 899A

were u battlin carson or jus talkin about yaself....until da last bar???
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Old 07-27-05, 04:29 PM   #14
Macreep
T&T
 
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From: Trinidad
This was feedback posted for CarsonJet

IP: FDF4 327D

bah.....battles too long..........................
 
Old 07-28-05, 03:41 PM   #15
*Nice*
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