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07-31-05, 03:08 PM
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pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: 4673 04CC
good lookin' on checkin' out my self introduction. sick u got a sick flow! i'll be sure to look for your new ones.
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07-31-05, 04:47 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: FB48 3F52
thanks for the love chip... keep it up kids
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07-31-05, 06:42 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: FB48 3F52
uppin for feed...
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07-31-05, 07:45 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: FB48 3F52
uppin ..........
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08-01-05, 01:48 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
wow man i felt this......tight shit....ill try and see if i can and persue these people into nominating you..if not write more stuff like this and you will definitley make it..my advice to you take more time and use bigger vocabulary it will make your piece more enjoyable to read this piece right hurr was perfrectly structured aok emotion and pretty damn good rhyme sceme i say keep it up man........and return the favor...and remember vocabulary is they key...iight mayne im out rtf
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08-01-05, 04:34 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: FB48 3F52
thanks man feelin the love... uppin for feed
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08-02-05, 03:32 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 289B C8AC
uppin...........
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08-02-05, 03:56 PM
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got u all confused n shit
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I chuckeld at the end of this
I like the picture you panited with your verse I enjooyed this peice and your vocab was good....\ heres the breakdown Flow:9/10 structure:10/10 punches: 10/10 nice drop
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08-02-05, 04:11 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 289B C8AC
thanks man.. uppin for some more of this
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08-02-05, 05:59 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Well Likke Di Told You Its Not A Good Rap But Good For The Soft Asses On This Site Hell These Fuck Scared To Show Attitude Well This Is Good For Poetry Heads Only Kid
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08-02-05, 08:40 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 289B C8AC
oh yah.. ill drop it on audio when i get around to it.. just for you maddrapper
 and then well see if its just poetry
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08-02-05, 10:05 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 289B C8AC
upppinggg......
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08-03-05, 11:36 AM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 119E 7433
keep the feedback comin
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08-03-05, 11:58 AM
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RV aint Dead
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IP: ECFF 7F50
nice drop kind a funny
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08-03-05, 12:15 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: 119E 7433
that was some bullshit feed... dont just post to get ur number of posts up....
if you want to give feedback ACTUALLY GIVE FEEDBACK.. rookies upset me lol
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