|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
08-01-05, 11:02 PM
|
#16
|
||||
|
Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
|
IP: 7E95 CD30
this was pretty good, changed topics in the middle of the verse so that kinda took away from it, the second part was emotional as they stated, structure was ok but needs a lil work, flow was good, vocab was decent, keep it up man
__________________
 i come from a time when you earned respect, for your rhyme and the way you made words connect, not the money that you made or the girls you sexed, a concept you obviously haven't heard of yet Mars Ill
 |
||||
|
|
|
08-01-05, 11:24 PM
|
#17
|
|||||
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 3240 794D
thanks, apreciate it^^^^ still lookin fo rmore feedback
|
|||||
|
|
|
08-03-05, 08:46 PM
|
#18
|
|||||
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 28AD 5545
uppin.........................
|
|||||
|
|
|
08-04-05, 03:09 PM
|
#19
|
|||||
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 28AD 5545
keeep the feedback comen please i will return the favor!!!!!
|
|||||
|
|
|
08-04-05, 08:00 PM
|
#20
|
|||||
|
Banned: Cheating
|
IP: 0825 899A
uppin............
|
|||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
