yup yup, i left feed on rain and thunder and my minds lost

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beat by: Me
this is gonna go on my demo...if im still makin one cuz of black magik's thread lmao anyway

that was.....hmmmm "intresting?" its all good iono....i ...dont understand ahaha i kno its about u not being nice but.....hmm "no real rhyme?" no plot? iono

Delivery needs to be better
needs Diff beat..
needz diff lyricz
plain and simple

needs work

"harsh feedback?" yes "why" kuzz it makes u better

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Get At Em'

oooooooohhhhhhhhh u got told by a newbie.....i smell a battle goin on me or is my mom just around??

AHAH damn son, you are soooooooooooo high on thta SC page link, lol. Bout as high as I am right now.

Yo man, I LOVED this beat man. and I'd def rip it. Shit's like an oldschool Ninja Gaiden sequence and that shit is pure throw-back status.


You are a fuckin perfect hybrid man. Your voice sounds liek a perfect fit of the remnants of Grunge posessed in the body of a rap body. You sound liek Rap's Kurt Kobain or even a calm trent reznor. I'd ghost for you in a heart beat man and coming from me that's saying a lot.

The hook sucked.

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I like to see people trying..

Your overall sound is actually pretty good.. but I think you've got to loosen up a little bit- especially in that chorus. I realize coming up with hooks is a bitch, it's what I hate most myself. If you just add some interim beats to the chorus (ie dont fit the vocals *exactly* with the song- add a couple syllables to get out of sync a little)

Not tryin to be an asshole btw.. just puttin my 2 cents in so i can post my new song

Keep trying, you've got potential.

-Sam.

thanks i guess lol

Yu Need To Work On ya Delivery....cuz with the title...and after listenin to this...Im Not convinced...Yu would do something....or that yu are a threat

but, i was feelin that effect about the devil...that was kew....the beat is str8...a lil simple...

Lyric wise:...Ya verse first was a lil simple...yu picked up on the second verse....just, work on ya delivery....


RTF?...'Sound Check'

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..:: Artik In The Phlesh::..
.Re-Writing The Re-Run.