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Blac-Out 1 16.67%
Atticus 5 83.33%
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Old 08-04-05, 01:42 PM   #16
CataclyzM-i-C
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Originally Posted by taz
Voted For: Atticus

win, better punches i liked it a lot blac-out's punches were kinda basic no hate though so my vote is for atticus



this vote shudnt count...tell strobe cuz
he aint explain a godam thing !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 08-04-05, 01:54 PM   #17
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Originally Posted by CataclyzM-i-C
Voted For: Blac-Out

ighht...

Flow & Structure - Blac...his verse was easier to understand but some barz were still stretched...atticus was all over the place...u was forcin it wayyyy 2 much...idk how u sayin that verse in ur head but it aint clickin in mine !

Punches - Blac...he came alot harder....they was still kinda wack but that "Think Twice" punch was harder then anythin atticus had to spit...atticus that last bar was garbage...u forced it on that n it didnt hit at all !

Metaphors - tie...both of yall had some "OK"? metas...Blac wudda won this catagory but he used that Wig Split shyt twice n played it out UGLYY...dont repeat almost the same punch next time

Multis - NoNe...period !...yall need to add some of them into ur rhymes !

Vote - Blac-Out



yall can return the favor on the battle in my sig...good look

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Pffft Haha Ok Mayn...
What A Fucking Idiot, I Had 3 Syllable Rhyme Scheme In Almost All My Bars...
Atleast A 2 In Every Single One...
And I Didnt Have A Single Forced Rhyme...

Someone Is Oviously After Some Battle Credits And Posts...
Lol What A Fucking Idiot...
.One.
 
Old 08-04-05, 01:56 PM   #18
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hahaha why u madd cuz ur shyt wasnt better
please dont make me clown u !

step ur game up b4 u get at me nigga cuz i'll son u
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Old 08-04-05, 02:01 PM   #19
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You Fucking Unknow, Who're You Talking To???...

My Game Is Far Beyond What Yours Could Ever Be...
I Dont Write Text, I Was Just Fucking Around...

Im A Topical Emcee...
One Inwich Has Won Just About Every Topical Award On This Site...

And Im Not Mad, I Could Careless...
You're Just An Idiot, Half The Shit You Said Wasnt Even Legitamite...
If I Cared I Would Find A Way To Get Your Vote Removed...
Weather I Lose Or Win This Makes No Difference To Me...
Cuz I Dont Write Text...
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Old 08-04-05, 02:20 PM   #20
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ya i smell it 2...u fuckin pussy...now all of a sudden u dont do text
hahaha what kinda shyt is a topical battle...str8 homo shyt
idk who u think u are but u needa blow it out ya ass bitch n go
think of some topics somewhere muthafucka...like i said...ILL SON U
so stop talkin unless u settin up a battle...bitch
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Old 08-04-05, 03:30 PM   #21
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Voted For: Atticus

Blac-Out:

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
^^decent opener 5/10
this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
^^stretched as hell you lose points for that 4/10
this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
^^ehh 3/10
im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
^^2nd time you said wig split. 4/10
act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
^^little stretched ok bar 4/10
i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
^^ok 5/10

Overall: 25/60 (42%)


Atticus:

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
^^decent nameplay ok opener 6/10
Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
^^no 3/10
Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
^^good bar 6/10
Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce)
^^ok meta decent closer 5/10

Overall: 20/40 (50%)


Vote: Atticus
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Old 08-05-05, 09:58 AM   #22
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Voted For: Atticus

Blac-Out

c'mon Atticus, wen it cums to Rappin, Wigger, ya wack at this
so fuck it, ill jus put the heat in ya mouth, so u can give the mac a kiss
^ at the wigger lolz, decent wordplay, no real punch though 4/10

this cats a bitch, fall back fore' i pull out my shank knife
and split ya wig down the middle, so next time u think about battlin me, you'll "Think twice"
^diggin the last line, nice wordplay formed into a punch 6/10

this wiggers homo, likes to take pipes, dont even begin lien
fuck wastin a bullet, ill just my pistol swing like wind chimes
^ didn't see a punch in this one actually but it was decent bar 4/10

im sick, my flow siphillis, this bitch can get hit wit the hammers
and wen it do, ill make ya fuckin wig split like bananas
^again the wig splitting? don't use shit twice man, self-glorifyin in first line 2/10

act slick, ill send a slug through ya lip and ya tooth
and U ugly as shit , i kno Dikes that can get more bitches than you
^last line was decent personal, first line i didn't like 6/10

i kno it aint fair dude, battle agin? bitch i dare you
Act like a G, then ill putta Stitch through ya hair do
^nah, weak closer 2/10

24/60 - 40%

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Atticus

Now... Hows That Kid Plan To Stand Up To His Last Out...
...I Practise Dark Arts,
Your A Dark Artist Tryna Shine At This When Its Blac-Out...
^coo playing off his name, might have been worded bit differently to hit harder though 6/10

Dope? Yes, Uum No... I Dont Think So, Ya Signature's Lien'...
...Ya Titles False,
Ya'll, He Blac'd-Out Last Time He Had Dope Signature Lines...
^again the blac-out thing, more hardhitting personal than the previous one though 7/10

Kid, Are You Retarded? Look At Your Name... Rap How?
...Plain And Simple, Initial It,
This Bitch's "B.O. Is Garenteed To Make Ya'll Cats Blac-Out"...
^haha, must be my favorite bar, made me laugh, bold personal 8/10

Even Your Crews Weak, Please... You Are Beyond Late...
...Hmm, Sorry B,
But If Raw Is War Your Not Surviving Beyon-Ce(Cena). (Beyonce)
^good wordplay, closed the deal with this one 7/10

28/40 - 70%
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Old 08-08-05, 06:37 PM   #23
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Voted For: Atticus

I didn't really like either, but for one, Atticus had personals and not gay jokes about the other's picture. This goes to Atticus, because for one he didn't self-glorify and had some punches. He had some okay personals, nothing really stood out, but he was just better then Blac-out.

Self-glorifying never wins battles, dude.

v/ Atticus
 
 


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