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Lost Memories
IP: 2372 BC06
Lost Memories Silence got me by my ear in my own Dream Petrified by its touch, feeling like a cloned Scheme Playing me into the impossible of a Memory Nothing dead, but I feel as I’m in a Cemetery Grown up a troubled youth, still stuck in my Reality Terrorism my fear, without luck in my Personality Leaving my nightmare, disputed by its Scripture Hesitation from its scare, confused by a Picture No limitations in my flow, remarkable by Facts As the light shines, Christ is watching me Relax No fractions to fix, never a twist in Subtraction No vibration in frustration, a mist in Levitation Proved stress in less time, a clock could Pause What should cause, a bouquet of flowers in a Vase Nice scenery in a vision, full of dirt and Dust Nothing clean, a beam of light burned my Lust No misconception, a wrist broken from Swinging A heart easily calm, by a smooth voice Singing Created by a choice, just to follow what Inspired Unable to be hired, questioned by the Unfired Law got money off a chain, no game in Cocaine Why deal to get a meal, the emotion shows Shame Living a measurement, a stain you couldn’t Clean A stressful scene, so obscene it maintains its Steam Money on they’re glock’s, gangsters got it Wrong No self destruction, by expressing oneself Strong My pain resorts in a file, no style in what I Expect Just to no I’m correct, a suspect in what I Intercept A love to hate, lots of people know most is Evil A aggression to hold a mic, to let it go so Lethal The instinct can effect, by making you feel Incorrect Provided with a list, leading the po to the Insect Even I had to ask, whats the task for me to Live Then run and hide, bonifide with nothing to Give Silence got me by my ear in my own Dream Petrified by its touch, feeling like a cloned Scheme Playing me into the impossible of a Memory Nothing dead, but I feel as I’m in a Cemetery
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IP: 2372 BC06
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
uhhm, pretty dope'n shit, try though uh, more multies and stuff like that, werdddd
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IP: 2372 BC06
yea i didnt focus on multiples here.
idk why i didnt i should of
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IP: 2372 BC06
uppin for feed fuck!
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The Darkness
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IP: 2029 97B3
Good Piece Son Alot Of Emotion In Here The Imagery Was Nice Man, Rhyme Scheme Was Meh Vocabulary Was Dope Yo Nice Use In Words And Met's Yo Keep Thios Up
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IP: 2372 BC06
thanks
lol at me not tryin in this one uppin for more
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Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 3240 794D
Pretty Nice..
Flow was nice, Multis lacked.. Concept was dope. Overall a pretty solid peace.. RTF- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203343 |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Nice peace right here, felt the emotion......vocab was iight nothing to complain about.....structure helped me get a good flow goin nice job! pretty solid piece 7.5/10.....up on multis.......RTF ON MY SIG LINKS 1
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IP: 997D A94C
lol @ people, i'll work wit good multiples then no one will look on me about them, then i dont do it and they want me too, fuckin people.
uppin
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Witness, 4 God, 4-Ever
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IP: 7425 1922
this was good, flow and structure were good, imagery and emotion were there too, really good drop, keep it up man
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IP: 997D A94C
thanks a lot, i appreciate the feed,
uppin i will rtf so leave links people
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Ike
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IP: EA72 FF7D
Damn @ the vocab lol.......this was pretty deep man...i really liked this.....you should put this on audio mos def.......the imagery was goood....it was just a dope peice....i dunno what else to say about it
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 3205 57D1
damn pretty dope shyt man... much props... well yeah very good vocab.. flow was on point.. good imagery and everything was jst perfect..
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