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Old 08-08-05, 09:14 PM   #1
Clarity
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just some random shit

IP: F239 69C0

I speak avarice-and-greed left lazarus-diseased in crusifiction,
cast-and-rip-beliefs pass-and-lift-with-ease with superstitions...
the truest-mission a holy conviction to the truest-christians,
the few-decisions smear blood on bibles just to slew-religion...
rib -age contractions separate with fractions it everlasting,
split-graves with bomb-actions the soul are never passing...
my flow instigating catastrophes when I battle-emcees,
has to be last to see murkage with my stacking-degrees...
I clear more lines then tetris you ''ll be on my wreck-list,
I use surgeries like boobs deplants'll leave you chestless...
shove crosses up rectums have them screaming holy-shit,
leave you like poker with bladed cards the way I fold-and-rip...
Ill leave insane burnt in ya brain just like a pyro maniacs,
vapor and mist with lighting my high-flow-tame-ya-rap...


yeeah it sucks but Im bored
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Old 08-08-05, 11:54 PM   #2
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This right here had good multies like whoa, had good consistent vocabulary at the beginning then died down......u progressivly changed toppics from christanity to gangster rap shit.....gutta stick to one topic yo....good flow/structure 6.5/10 keep it up keep elevatin and rtf on my links in tha sig which ever u want......1
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