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| Young Blaze |
  
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5 | 100.00% |
| PhreeNapdizzle |
  
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08-09-05, 01:59 PM
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This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
IP: C209 A312
man this was a close 1 both verses were good that's why i won't vote .... but yeah man you should always try to explain yourself it could make the difference between the w/l
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08-10-05, 04:39 AM
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the real man of steel
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IP: DACE 6461
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...... ..........................
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08-11-05, 06:36 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: DACE 6461
UUUUUUppppiiiiiinnnnn............................. .......
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08-11-05, 08:17 PM
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This was feedback posted for Young Blaze
IP: 0825 899A
y0 tHaT sHiT wUz FiRe SuN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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08-11-05, 08:36 PM
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IP: E31E 5CBB
Voted For: Young Blaze
Young Blaze took this with ease no question....... Structure: Young Blaze Flow: Young Blaze Word play: Young Blaze Multis: Young Blaze Personals: only one and it too was from Young Blaze PhreeNapdizzle -- advise: don't use "/" played out find a new structure, forget about telling us how great u are work on insulting ur opponent in the flow.. that goes to you to young blaze you did that a couple of times.. but it just tied very well so its ignored. . . Futhermore: just go and tell me.. "here! little hill billy, sin!"/ how.much.would-you give me if i let my willy win..: very preschool looked like you were just trying to rhyme.... sound 50 centish and taht very preschool . . . you could have said peter pper picked a peck of peppers and i would have given you more credit.... i aint trying to hate im trying to stop u from doing the same thing on ur next battle... also creativity is lacked in your verse... wordplay. . .puns... jokes... have your audience think alittle... make sure you flow is easy to follow cause many ppl on RV as soon as shit don't flow they don't even finish ur verse . . . .so work on those things keep writing and good luck to both
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 just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . .  or u just gonna make me laff
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08-11-05, 08:38 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for PhreeNapdizzle
IP: E993 1166
Flwo verse, you fuckin' herb.......................
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08-12-05, 05:02 PM
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the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
Uppppiinnn........................................ ..
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08-13-05, 12:55 AM
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IP: 2EF7 66B7
Voted For: Young Blaze
long ass battle......... Young Blaze - you had an all round good verse, the structure was nice and laid back giving the verse a decent flow all the way through. punches were there and were consistently hard hitting, a lot of this though ....................... i thought that was unnecessary, the wordplay and shit was dope as always, cud get a little more complex in places with the rhyme scheme but it was still dope.......... Dizzle - your verse to me seemed kind of herbish, i dont know if you're new to this whole thing, but first drop the // at the end of lines cuz it looks gay. the flow was aight, kind of choppy sumtimes.....punches were there although not as hard hitting as blaze. you had a couple of ok ones that made me laugh but overall i think you lacked in consistency, also try beffin up ya punches with some killer wordplay n shit and you'll do better. V/ - Young Blaze plz....RTF on my marvjay battle....links in my siggy  oh and, if you don't my vote will be removed...(only cuz the voting on RV sucks ass lately) pz. again
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