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Old 08-10-05, 06:34 AM   #1
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dope like soap on a rope.(im such a good whymer)
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Old 08-10-05, 06:35 AM   #2
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Whats The Point Of IT?
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Old 08-10-05, 06:39 AM   #3
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dope like soap on a rope.(im such a good whymer)



^^let' see


Dope...does rhyme with soap...and rope does rhyme with dope

but you misspelled rhymer

and the imagery of soap on a rope suggests things hanging...and I don't think you want that forum hanging, do you?


further more, your flow was off a little tinny bit...and try to use more metas


overall, I'd rate that a 6/10



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Old 08-10-05, 07:05 AM   #5
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the q thinks too much, who the fuck analise's a joke?
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Old 08-10-05, 07:27 AM   #6
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the q thinks too much, who the fuck analise's a joke?



^^^the irony...mine WUZ a joke




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