nice piece overall. i liked the use of emotion and imagery (i was impressed by how well i could feel the emotion in this piece, even though sometimes i couldn't relate). kind of old to keep uppin' but i ain't mad at u. other than a couple flow issues it seemed like a perfect piece.

8.5/10 keep it comin'

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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