Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-23-05 at 03:11 PM

Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in.

Bussa Flow has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 03:11 PM.

rawflowz, keep ya jaws closed,
or feel a lethal blow,
like killa coke for ya nose,
im a killa you a joke, im exposin this hoe,
he provokin me to let em know,
you aint raw its like you got a condom on when you flow,
ima get on this bitch, you know im cold as snow,
leave em in a ditch, hes a faggot on the low,
stuck in the closet, dont want no 1 to know,
but its time to come out, so open the do',
pussy, ill smoke you like newport hundo's, you rookie,
n couldnt touch me wit a 30 foot pole,
ill take ya life n kidnap ya soul,
my lyrical knife just slashed this hoe,
i run shit like a track meet so,
i cant be touched, untouchable,
like a pussy that cant be fucked, im tight jerk,
from my sean john jeans to my southpole shirt,
n whats tucked unda the southpole is the fo' to leave you merked, you just a worm so ill leave you squirmin in the dirt,you dont have to be christian to be layin in a church............pussy ass nucca

RawFlowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-05 06:59 PM.

You bout to get whored think of yourself as a lyrical village bike
Couldn't "buss" a "flow" if ya sat wid kleenex tryna masturbate the mic
I'll help your flow, "beating" you "finer" like scrambled eggs for brunch
"20 lines" max so that's how long it takes to get to tha point of your punch
Lyrically this lame brained motherfucker be inferior
All front like a Maybach with cloth n plastic made interior
How you gonna fuck with me, yo all you fakes the same
Come step up when you learn to spell and punctuate your name
Like a village clown, your only purpose is to play tha foo'
Your flows are played, man every time you spit i'm feelin déja vu

yo lemme up this shizzle real quick.....................

upppppin 4 vooootttteeessss

Voted For: RawFlowz

raw flows punches hit harder, flows is nicer. lurical content is more effective. closure is weak could of ende it with more of a bang.

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uppppin for voooottteeessssss

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Voted For: RawFlowz

this was a blah battle but rawflowz gets this foe a better structure and a better flow....punches kinna hit harder and personals were decent...vocab was zero from both parts anyways....rawflowz had a more decent closer and opner...bussa...you need to work on ur flows really...cos ur verse was just long and didnt flow...most of ur punches were lackin entertainment too...i dont wanna sound monotonous or purge the immage of a hater but go elevate...really!

drop honest votes in 1 of my battles and plz xplain 'em well...thanx tons

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Voted For: RawFlowz

bussa- your rhymes too basic. your scheme was simple. the rhymes were basic snow/low/know.. & your punches were rather weak and plain, and also played.

Darkman- decent verse. 2nd bar was nice. 4th bar was played, even though its a personal everyone has used one of those on an opponent, hence my name. good verse tho

V/ Darkman

rtf on another battle..and i will on another one of yours.

Voted For: RawFlowz

I think that |||DRKMAN||| got this battle because i feel that |||DRKMAN||| came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt |||DRKMAN||| got it they were used effectifely and were on point Bussa Flow u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to |||DRKMAN||| good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to |||DRKMAN||| and flow and structure i'll give to |||DRKMAN|||.

V/|||DRKMAN||| There's my sig be sure to return the favour honestly within 3 days (vs E.C audio) or vote removed

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