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Old 08-21-05, 02:13 AM   #1
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yup fam im solo (on this site)

Imma poet lookin for a crew to role wit...im very loyal and welll yea im loyal..i been writin for bout 5 years and i consider myself not a newb in poetry but not the best.......get at me.....heres a few poems imma be postin here.....

[Just Words]

I hear what your saying but i deaf myself's understanding...
You say your sorry, i take it with hollowed meanings...
You only speak of are cursed by me and turnned into Just Words...
You played my emotion as your personal band...
Have i not bleed for you?...
Have i not expressed the true depth of my emotions?
Why would you then return to curse me?
Your blinded apoligies return as Just Words...
Your mouth i see moving, but nothing exits..Why?
I hear your speaking but ruffles of "I Love You" register in my mind as Just Words..


[ The Experience ]


Grasping your body, temptation running high...
Knees crumbling with anxioty, thy lips the key to my inner desires...
Heart rates gain speed, the vision of you under me sends this mind into a sexual bliss...
Sweat escaping us as we entwine in this crimson ceremony of passion..
Exstacy transported from one to another with every curess of your suckulett frame...
Fantasy taking form, explosion in every movement...
Sensations within' us, tensions so esculated the mother of jesus would frown...
With every kiss of your lips, my heart bleeds with delight...
With every thrust of passion i commit, prayers decoded in moans escape you asking God however did heaven descend...
Desire embodies us as the lust we create consumes our exsistance...
Glairs into your eyes send this passion struck angel into shock capable of numbing the Devils hate for moments on end...
Your nails penetrate my flesh forcing blood suffocated with joy to rush to the surface...
Only to beg for freedom from this delightfully painful experience...
Willing to clutch onto this position for centuries to come...
Like the ocean's sense of infinity, this experience shall forever be..


let me kno...i also got a piece up in the poetry section...let me kno
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Old 08-21-05, 03:57 AM   #2
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try out for cs..
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Old 08-21-05, 11:25 AM   #3
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Uou can tryout for The Inc.
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Old 08-21-05, 12:49 PM   #4
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Go Check Out Operation Take Over We're A Branch Of The First Ever Crew On This Site....Go To Our Forum And Our Try Out Thread In Crew's And Collab's Leave Links In Both Places
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Old 08-21-05, 12:58 PM   #5
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This is Key Rogue kneegrow get in Ghost Writerz

if u are the kid in UF
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Old 08-21-05, 03:07 PM   #6
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try to get wit Trigga Town Inc., were lookin for some good poets.
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Old 08-21-05, 07:01 PM   #7
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damn alot of feed....more than i expected...iight imma peep all of ya crews...and yes key i am the kid from UF..

Uno
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Old 08-22-05, 10:38 PM   #8
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Old 08-24-05, 01:53 PM   #9
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come tryout for Amerikaz Nightmare
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Old 08-25-05, 08:27 PM   #10
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IM STILL FREE...

Ghost Writers i guess dissapeared get at me
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Old 08-25-05, 10:19 PM   #11
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offer still stands.......... tryout for Trigga Town Inc. and we'll put u to work right away if u get in.
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Old 08-25-05, 10:31 PM   #12
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The Movement homie pm me for details you will be welcomed
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