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08-22-05, 04:40 AM | #1 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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Paroxysm vs. .Lola Cruez. II
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You can find the rules if you follow this link: !Rules! Read em... Check in by Wednesday Pieces due by Friday Voting closes by Sunday Topic: Remnants Of The Reaper's Concious
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08-22-05, 09:55 AM | #2 | ||||
The Martyr
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Man..I've already did a topic like this ...was wonderin if you could change it with Tweety's permission of course .... Checkin in by the way!
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08-22-05, 10:56 AM | #3 | |||||
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If you two agree on another topic, I shall change it right away...
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08-22-05, 03:40 PM | #4 | |||
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LMAO! AGAIN!?...word..Let's do it up. Yeah change the Topic.
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08-25-05, 04:23 AM | #5 | ||||
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Extension granted till Sunday, pm me a new topic
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08-28-05, 06:01 PM | #6 | ||||
The Martyr
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He fed a razor blade - it grazed - scraped against his face Trimming at the facial glade - a daze - he tried to cut the haze Police are on the way - unphazed - knows but stares a gaze Reality won way - dismayed - he chases yesterday My minds a mess - body aches - most of the time I don't see straight I gorged I ate - for the past few weeks I've known naught but hate Destroy creates - peace - the fate of my sister lead to this day It made me this way - an instrument of fate - wielded to slay She blushed at the world - just trusting the world Entrusted with pearls of wisdom - still an innocent girl So is this why her curls - are wild and unfurled - matted with blood Is this why are her clothes are torn asunder from forcing of love Flinched - as the coroner gave a shove - I'm at the morgue This was a call I'd never expected at four in the morn The misery worn - on her tatterd form - would haunt my mind Leaving me in a pit of despair - near impossible to climb - out of Count up - and tally the guilt - of the reality of Whose fault it was - why she really got killed I willed - with all my might to keep chill But this disaster was a dish - and I'd foot the bill I swilled - the last of my drink and my pills Trying to dull - the overwhelming sadness I feel Ill - wondering would this be the deal If I hadn't strayed from her side - stayed at her heels At her first college party - I was suppose to protect her Instead I elected - to be derilect - left with Heather An animal out of shelter - everything musta - been helter skelter Wouldn't have been taken advantage of - had I been there to help her treasured - the weariness invading - wanly anticipating The moment I'd fade in to sleep - who needs counting sheep When you have alchohol and painkillers within easy reach Fleeing into blackness I finally feel asleep Hours later I awakened - with a thirst that would not slaken I had this urge to find the culprit of the crime Give him a piece of mind - then kill him slow - like time When I was through - leave him worse then when animals attack So for weeks I tracked - the bloody murderers tracks It seemed - I'd gain an uncanny craft - for knowing where he's at A weary cat - since his heinous act - he always watched his back But he'd drank too much this night - and that's what cost his ass I found him - passed out on the couch - looked down with disdain This was the source of such enormous grief anguish and pain I knew his name - I knew the face - his gestures Last semester - he'd been my favorite professor I felt no remorse - as I killed him - rent his flesh After I finished up - I let escape a weary breath So this was it - all the fuss about grissly deaths It hadn't been that bad at all - just a little mess The doors shattered - he smiled - embracing the end He had called police this morning - with murder confessions Turned - yelled "Come and get me" - drew a weapon Got shot 5 times - died - but bullets don't kill Revanants - Revanants are dissatisfied beings that come back from the dead to rectify an injustice. |
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08-29-05, 07:13 AM | #7 | ||||
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Paroxysm advances to the final! Congrats!
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