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08-24-05, 12:00 AM
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"One Son's Symphony"
IP: DB16 D9CD
http://www.soundclick.com/limitededitioncan
Word...another emotional track...but this is beyond anything I've ever done before... This is Limited Edition at his absolute best at this point in time. Leave feed. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205584 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205566 |
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08-24-05, 12:06 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 0572 8ED8
this song is aight your flow got better ...the last time i heard you was a long long time ago....word the beat is str8 hook was aight....the direction u was goin was aight overall id say about7/10 word stay up and hit up Walkin Free word http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205817
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08-24-05, 02:08 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Uppin' this shit............................
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08-24-05, 02:09 PM
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IP: 5F3B 8112
Iite im feelin this song, good emotion, ure deliverance was really good, we could hear you, hook was rlly good, im feelin the flow, liking the topic chosen, its a deep route to go talking about these situations and specially getting the message across, I think u did that near perfect, reminds me of some Eminem type ish....1...holla
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08-24-05, 03:47 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Thanks a lot...
Uppin' for some more feed...favors returned... |
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08-24-05, 04:24 PM
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I'm So Punny
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IP: 4E71 78C5
this songs was pretty sick...i'm going to be hard on you because i'm all about elevation...your flow is a lot better in this song...but you still try to stretch out rhyming words a little bit too much...chorus is my least fave part...it's too simple...and although most emotional songs don't need to be lyrical, this hook should be a little more...ya dig...quality is getting better...the subject matter was pretty dope, you painted a decent picture in my head. you can still do better, you rush songs a little too much. But the heart and drive is there over almost anyone i know...good shit...keep it rollin...sometimes your words got a little muddy...the first 6 bars were fuck fire...lgood shit...i like that flow
7/10... flow 7 lyrics 5 emotion 9 beat 8 hook 5 good shit
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08-24-05, 04:31 PM
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OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
start of this gave me chills
everything was good in it...track has lots of HIGHS that are pronounced...but this is one of the best tracks I've heard on here good shyt and yea, flow is good...but, the theme and creativity stood out most 8/10 |
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08-25-05, 02:08 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Thanks all...
Uppin' this shit.... |
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08-25-05, 02:26 PM
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Blow Me
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IP: 963B DD50
This track was straight fire.. ur emotion and delivery were alot better then ur prior tracks.. the hook was lacking.. but the story line and ur creativity was the high point.. your lyrics were good.. this whole song was nice man.. ummm i liked ur beat choice.. its not something i would use .. but u sounded good on it..sooo overall im gonna give this an 8.5/10... that is all
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08-25-05, 02:34 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 0825 899A
alot of emotion here i liked it i mean ya flow could be a lil more fluent but other than that the lyrics and emotion were so real... and some of the feelings in this song are the same that i have with my personal life man i can relate keep doin it man later
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08-25-05, 03:02 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Wow thanks to all...
Uppin' this shit some more... |
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08-25-05, 08:31 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Uppin'
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08-25-05, 09:55 PM
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The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
lol @ ya lil intro there,
nice beat, damn this a cool lil banger, you musta made this beat pretty good man, flow is pretty good man nice lyrics, emotion isn't to bad i'd say its pretty good lol, the hook was a lil awkward, the vocals could be upped on the hook man, damn the 2nd verse would have to be the most interesting verse on this track nice job man you seem to be gettin better man. 1
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08-26-05, 03:43 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Thanks all....
Uppin' this once again... |
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08-26-05, 09:29 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6EDA E3AB
this is by far ur best song ur flow has gotten l;ike whoa alot better uve been elevating alot
i liked the lyrics on the 2nd verse they wer really good ur intro was umm well i didnt like it lol :/
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