http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206097
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206638


I dont have audio capabilities anymore so since I'm new here I'll drop my old audios


I wrote this as if I was somebody who was feeling suicidal
no I'm not suicidal, it's just a topic my boy threw at me
and didn't think I could make a track out of

http://www.soundclick.com/demonicstorm

Or so you know beforehand, my stage name is Lioness

the song might not be cleared yet, I just uploaded it to this new SC
I forgot the password to my other one but it's cool
cause I got all my tracks on my dmusic page

so if it's not loading just give it a moment, Soundclick be tweeking like that

it's worth a listen


-edited to say-
p.s. I know the vocals are low, I did it like that on purpose
adding slight dramatics to the track


-Storm

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damn, no love huh?

All good




-Storm

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mite as well show sum love...

kinda a slow flow, should have the vocals turned a lil louder, an okay voice, original, im gettin more into it as it goes along... wait, r u a gurl? dunno y i didnt notice b4 but yea, for a femcee this is reaaaalll illness, but yea, nyce ending

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best Audio Head May- the Omen*

OMEN ON MYSPACE

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Yea, I'm a female
hence the "SuperBitch" emblem in my sig


For the topic and that beat, that was the only flow that worked
when I drop my other tracks you'll see how I get down

appreciate the love
thought you was gonna be on some hate shit cause I was fucking with you in the beef thread





-Storm

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Listenign through some better thna average home entertainment speakers.

The beat choice is dead on the money. fits perfect. The lyrics are dead on the bucks anth the emotion is perfect. The flow is on and I can tell you aint' one of these mofos that started rappin on the internet - instead you rapped wher rap begins. It's a hot-ass track yo and excells at what it's meant for. It's definitely some real talk and anyone who been there wil lbe able to connect with it REAL fast. My only gripe is that your vocals need some compression on em to level out the volume, then some EQing to lift em off of the beat, maybe turn down the reverb a little and make em pop up off the inst. Other than that yo, I liked it.

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thanks @ Dooms


but I did the vocals like that on purpose
I wanted my voice to mesh with the beat

wanted to give it that "voice" inside of your head feel to it
like it wasn't me spitting it was just a voice you heard in your head when you heard the beat

appreciate the love




-Storm

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yeah, I can feel that - sorta liek beans did on the beat on dynasty, but in this case, it felt to me like it melted too far into it sometimes, like I couldn't discern lyrics from beat. But maybe it's just me. Good work on the track. Uno.

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I feel you

anyway it goes, still appreciate the feed





-Storm

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No problem. Damn, why the hell you seem so familliar to me...

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if you was ever on UF, you might know me

but outside of that I have no clue





-Storm

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Nah I wasn't on UF that I can remember. Ah, maybe it's nothing. peace.

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I love this beat, you need to boost your vocals and if you don't have a mic pre-amp then when you mix your tracks slide your vocal ontop of eachother

Your flow is nice, quality sucks but mines do to

Your emotion is nice,lyrics are nice too,
I definantly can relate to most of your shit,
Delivery is nice, and presence isn't good because of your quality

good track

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yea i remember hearing this on uf..nice delivery great presence...emotion was great..lyrics hittin hard beat iz sick indeed..I remember this song way back tho from another site forgot which one tho..

I did the vocals like that on purpose (yet again) @ Trem



@ I Daughter, probably HHI or Audioholics before either site shut down

the only other site I've dropped my audios




thanks for the feed



-Storm

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