www.soundclick.com/intermental

first track...

1st verse: Intermental
2nd verse: Tha Q

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206359
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206750

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the intro was pretty cool i liked the clip it fit real well..i like that movie too lol....1st verse...your lyrics was cool but it sounds like your rushing...slow down abit...you pronouncation is aight but it could be better...your breathing to me is aight..your voice is tight you sound young.your delivery is cool..q comes in i always loved your flow..word...delivery is cool lyrics is nice....i like how you do your voice dubz...beat is tight whered you get it? lol overall this was a nice track word

good track INTER


nice shyt


stay up



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Thanks praise to Q for bein on this....yo ecko thanks alot really appreciate....

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Yo ecko the beat is from these niggas:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=153196

its free each beat

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lmao@echo's pic lol but anyway nice track you had good flow throughout nice quality liked that beat erm youre delivery was decent your lyrics were good sounded nice went with the song well...erm yeh the intro went well wid it where u get all these dope intro things from??? anyway keep up One.

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OYD MAFIA

Thanks G...tha q got that intro on that track

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Chea' intro is tight

Intermental - Yeah u worked on ur delivery alot more emotion in ur voice fo'sho, u riding the beat well too g props, lyrics r coo , infact i think u sound better on fast beats def helps ur flow felt on slower beats sometime ur flow fell off but this helps u

Q - yeah 1st track i heard from u, u def dope, got a real presence on the mic perhaps lyrics are ur weakest point still on point, delivery and flow was fyrrre

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Thanks dawg i think its helpin me on slower tracks now.....appreciate it

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uppppin..........

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upppppppppppppppppp

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Int. - Flow was off at times...but the content was straight...nothing really WOW or thought prevokin..but still a nice verse...like someone said up there..it seemed like you were in a rush which hurt your flow drastically because you got offbeat at times..thast the only thing that really needs to be worked on..

The Q. - Pretty good flow, content was straight just as INT but yours had a little more bang to it..which made you slightly outshine dude..but together you two did good..overall its an average to slightly above avg piece...i like it tho...keep up..and do what you do...

iite thanks yea im workin on my flow but like i said its my first fast beat and im a slow rapper....but thanks dawg apprecite it

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sup inter sup tha q

wow inter this is your ebst, i love how you start your verse, flow is off sometimes but still dope, wow man very nice, emotion is there as fuck, pretty dope, ur better on fast beats man, nice verse tha q, nice flow and nice quality and shit, nice lyrics, overall its pretty dope
keep em coming