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Old 09-05-05, 04:05 PM   #16
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Thanks sorry didnt know you were usin the beat......my bad
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Old 09-05-05, 04:07 PM   #17
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man, its coo, happens all the time, lol, drop feedback on my new track Freeway Musiq
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Old 09-05-05, 05:05 PM   #18
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Willdo..................
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Old 09-05-05, 05:58 PM   #19
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I agree with G deuce...#1...beat was cool


but, ur flow was off in spots...I think u jus chose the wrong tick of the beat to start on...sorta like Traidmarx used to do...ur flow is good...it jus didn't fit perfectly all the time with this beat

not bad though


jus relax man...relax...


flow got pretty good toward the end


not bad homie

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Old 09-06-05, 08:04 PM   #20
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Wow...

I would kill this beat...But anyways, pretty solid shit, it would sound ALOT better with some adlibs in there...Also, you need to work on your flow, because its not consistent at all...But overall, pretty good shit.
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