Voted For: Status

Status

You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane(NICE OPENER)
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids(DAMN NICE ONE)
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
(IIGHT CLOSURE)

Status- u had sum hard punches n ur shit flowed nicely. U cudda done betta on da closure but da was da only flaw in ya verse. Nice use of personals n punches da hit hard.
8.5/10


Implicit

This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
(1st line wuz wack but i wuz feelin da 2nd line)
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
(ummmmmmm no)
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
(meh closure)

Implicit-u came out weak here. Sum of da punches u threw cudda been betta if u used ya wordplay betta. I wuz feelin sum of ur lines but it didnt really look like u tried dat hard in dis battle. Ur structure wuz str8 but u jus need ta work on throwin sum harder punches n personals dat really hit n u b iight. Not a bad verse but u cudda done betta
6/10

v/Status for comin harder w/ betta punches n personals

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Voted For: Status

Status..
You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
Word...6
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
Meh...5
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
Nah...4

Overall: 15/30


Implicit..
This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
Eh...5
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
Meh...5
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
2 King lines...nah..4

Overall: 14/30

Vote: Status

uppin this .................................................. ...........

cant rtf on this, he in my crew...................

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

Voted For: Status

Implicit
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This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
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yo...your substance in this verse......wasnt hittin status hard at all....try to use more harder shyt to use in ur punchlines..
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Status
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You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
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werd bro, ur punchlines was rough...you got my vote on this from the punchlines and that nice audio line...

pCe

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aight yo upping this for one more vote hopefully............