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Tha 1 An Onlii B | 5 | 83.33% | |
Ryda | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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09-19-05, 08:54 PM | #1 | |
Bringin The Rukas
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Ryda vs Tha 1 An Onlii B
IP: 0825 899A
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 4-0 Tko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-22-05 at 08:54 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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09-19-05, 08:55 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-05 08:55 PM.
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09-19-05, 08:58 PM | #3 | |
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: 0825 899A
hey Tha 1 An Onlii B
u kno wat i see a person tryin to spit like me ill set my anger free on thee hope u kno i spit hot fire i inspire newbs like u u now who u messin wit afta this battle ull need a medical kit ur heart will be broken my raps are the finest afta this battle ull be callin me highness ill drop u like a bomb fast and quick cause my flow is just that sick so u can just suck my dick ill drop ya like scarface dropped cops if u beat me ill give ya props
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09-19-05, 09:03 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 94F0 D261
Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-05 09:03 PM.
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09-20-05, 03:48 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 94F0 D261
yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding
your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding* your absurd thinkin you can beat tha 1 an onlii so im jus gonna prove to everyone that your a phony you make me laugh wen thinkin your tha best of all-time wen you git on tha mic u should be arrested for a crime my vocab is high and thats why your so amiss** dont worry i wouldnt expect you to comprehend my diss *itz jus a little bit of nameplay **amiss means confused(im workin on my vocab) |
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09-20-05, 06:45 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 94F0 D261
uppin fo votez on this homiez.....................
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09-20-05, 06:49 PM | #7 |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 19AD 4244
Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
opener pretty good personal love to see them your structure much improved flow better than ive seen from you vocab was good too all around pretty good verse yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding* this line was better than alll of his put otgether ryda ur flow was good and thats it your structure wow work on that i dditn feel anythign in ur verse really no punches work on everything if you want help pm me and i will help you
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09-20-05, 07:41 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 9092 ADBE
Voted For: Ryda
The only reason im voting for rider is a better flow ryda 6/10 The one and Onlii 5/10 closee battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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09-20-05, 08:10 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 94F0 D261
yo thatz tha wackest vote i ever seen in ma life...yea he had an iight flow but i had everything else...ur vote makez no fuckin sense...maybe ur a dickrider but idk..im not too worried about it...no hate...hit me bak
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09-20-05, 08:17 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 1CF2 12BA
Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
there is some elevation needed on both sides............. but i'm gonna start ont he good points first........... Tha 1 An Onlii B had a pretty good flow......... better punchlines...........however many lines where played i was feeling the structure and i thought it lack creativity......... i see alot of potential but right now your lines are pretty basic try to incorporate more wordplay...............ryda i like the structure your flow ws better... however no punchlines........... you just kept talking about how great u are this is a battle concentrate on insulting ur oppenet.......... ur verse also lack substance add some wordplay metaphors puns.... whatever it takes ........ like i said i thought this battle was basic Tha 1 An Onlii B gets my vote base on harder hitting punchlines.... no hate just constructive critism take if you like...........PEACE 1
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff |
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09-20-05, 08:30 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 94F0 D261
thanx fo tha vote mayne...uppin again...hit me bak
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09-20-05, 08:45 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 1CF2 12BA
btw please drop an honest vote on flow verse v. Define trying to finish this battle been up for a while thanks
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just like the smilie says . . . can u spit . . . or u just gonna make me laff |
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09-20-05, 09:00 PM | #13 | |
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: EE58 AEAE
Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
both weren't all that good........ but that's why you're not elite yet....... not all of onlii's were punches, but ryda's punches were so weak, i'd give it to onlii
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09-20-05, 09:04 PM | #14 | ||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: EE58 AEAE
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onlii: better flow, but flow still wasn't perfect..... okay punches, but a little self-glorification mixed in Ryda:bad flow, but not too much worse than onlii's........... okay punches but not as nice as onlii's overall: both need elevation........ this battle was like who made the least mistake's instead of who was the better MC.......... try to join an elevation crew.....
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09-20-05, 09:06 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 94F0 D261
thanx fo tha vote and feedback homie...appreciate it...uppin again
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