Voted For: Natural killa

CarsonJet
Now let me start this piece, with a sigh of relief.....yes
I must confess, For a sec...I thought I called out a real vet
^^nothin too hard, no real personal [5-10]
Instead I caught this,"a killa of text", thrown outta context
Boy, you couldn't spit tight' if you were dressed in spandex
^^spandex bar? old as fuck [1-10]
So let's Digress, to the reason that your wins are joke
Your lines wouldn't be dope if you wrote em wit coke
^^that was aight but u tend to use played concepts [5-10]
Yes I know...you get vote's, But Killa take note....
Your broke...There's no one here left to go an Deep Throat
^^that was aight not that hot though [4-10]
Your done, Your finished, Your in my cross-hair's...
You couldn't step up to this verse if I made you these stairs
^^i think that was ya best line [7-10]

ALTOGETHER = 22%

Natural Killa
splittin ya gaurd..i'm spittin so hard..ur soul's quezy..it's a giddy flight
can't say I got no life,mister
.......ur 21 years old on this damn kiddy site....
^^ehh that was a straight line set-up was okay [6-10]
ya shit hits me light..claim ur on a roll?..well ur bout to fall back on those wheels
ur an audio head battlin me..but it don't matter..ur whack on both feilds
^^so so [5-10]
cracking ur sheilds...if u ever won anything..guess wat?..it was all luck
'n reason for no award isn't cuz 'a herbs...reason for no award..
.................is cuz YOU SUCK!!.......
^^ehh kinda good but kinda bad [4-10]
all 'em threads,PM's,& IM's..wow..ur either obsessed or gay for that tattle 'n spin
cos shit...I think this cat's fallen in love...this is MORE than a battle to him -_-
^^ahahaha good humor to liven up ya verse [7-10]
rattle ur shins 'n hookin ya flight..u shook in this fight..u prolly gonna bite some shit
and u ain't got no errands to run..u just checkin in late just to pre-write ur shit
^^prewrite <--frequently used but nice tho [6-10]

ALTOGETHER = 28%



wordplay--> natural killa
punchlines--> natural killa
personals--> neither
multiples--> neither
creativity--> both
structure--> carsonjet
humor--> natural killa
flow--> both

overall: Natural Killa

uuuuuuuuuupppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

i dunno why ur gettin people to vote.....
it's gettin closed.

get em to vote for u on ur other battles.

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