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born crazy
IP: 8DC7 0361
Im stire crazy the rooms spinnin making me tipsy
I'm passing out I need a chick to kiss me Im spitting so sickly with thoughts of killing i'll slit you open just for not feeling My style thats wild more hyper den adhd With high impulses dat are made 2 make you crazy hyperventerlating with stress cuz my lifes such a mess But I was put here to annoy I guess im blessed maby to depressed but come out on top when I spit Got your ass in my power doing cart wheals and back flips i'll peal off ur chap lips till they bleed chop ur head off wid a hatchet theres no1 iller with my skill cuz I can turn you into a match stick Lyrics that bust open like volcanos turning you to dust Whenever you cuss your gonna feel frustration when I bust I'm killing you quick just about to spill your guts and im gonna throw an uppercut but not ya face into your nuts You suck more it's a damn shame that you are a whore you ain't special from all the cats that I've seen before.. Alrite peace |
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IP: 31C2 62EB
Drop two links to two OM's have you left decent feedback on
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IP: 3F7D ED7B
Vocabulary: Still nothing amazing, can be worked on.
Flow: Okay, that hatchet line didn't seem all that good on the flow side to me... Structure: Okay. The hatchet line stretched it out. Concept: Same as all your other things. Topic: Same as all your other things. Favorite Lines: None quotable. Rating: 6/10 Advice: Find an original topic, or if you continue pursuing self-glorification but you need to be original, because all you seem to me is another wannabe generic rapper with no wordplay who relies on his friends with four posts to come in here and say 'it's dope' when leaving no legitimate feed. Find some originality. Remember to RTF on Dead Beat Holiday.
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