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10-15-05, 04:07 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 7CCC 4417
Its bien re-opened...
...but just honest vote on my oreo one.
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10-15-05, 10:27 PM
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Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
Dipset holla .
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10-16-05, 01:11 AM
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Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
need one more.... omg...........................................
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10-16-05, 09:58 AM
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A Life Of Chryme
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This was feedback posted for Shazz
IP: 0825 899A
i honestly can't vote...there are no appealing punches personals rhyme scheme vocabular multies wordplay etc.
this battle was by far one of the worst ive read in a while.....you both should up a alot on everything big-0- try upping your structurre and making it more fluently like shazz's ok, when your trying to throw a punch make sure the line above it is a set up...and when you do throw a punch make sure it isnt a 4th grade punch...actually put some thought into it so it looks like you care.....i mean.....seriuosly..."next time dont show up" no thats not a punch...just elevate fo real... shazz-i heard you were dope on rb, but so far you've batteled no body except for newb's dawg...and no offence but your battle skill seemed to have died...your first 3 lines dont rhyme....and your whole verse had atleast 5th grade punches...i mean..this shits boring like math class?.......nope sry...dont work...gotta be more creative and constructive with you verse.....your structure is iight...probally the only thing going for you.. no hate to either....just some elevation tips...1
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10-16-05, 11:12 AM
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Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
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10-16-05, 02:18 PM
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Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
Fuck it uppin............................................
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10-16-05, 03:51 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 9E82 E784
Voted For: Shazz
Flow- Shazz Structure- Shazz Punches- Shazz Metas- Shazz Enjoyment- Shazz Vote- Shazz No offense.... But Big O i didnt really see anything in your battle that made me say "wow" Shazz def got this by my view. Your dumb and retaded so give it up Next time just dont show up...........- Big O The closing 2 didnt really help, and ya rhymes were kinda basic and didnt really have any strong points.... "Hes got a avatar as a city? Ya can’t even go there with your ability Garbage trash, damn you suck so bad you could use a bath"- Shazz Good lines Shazz.
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