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10-16-05, 01:04 AM | #1 | ||||
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State Of The Art
IP: ABB2 431B
Pigmated fragments of colours fracture this mixture
As an anonymous tipster drains blood from these fixtures I throw paint outside the frame to create pictures It's my life, it shouldn't be written in scriptures Radical hipsters rapture this fictual prison They say they were born Jewish, were christened - And indicted as Christian to take the time just to listen As to what Jesus explained, how he was slain How he saved baptists from dieing for pain Now I'm crafted in shame, set to paint hate on a canvas I stab the pages, exheuberatin' the ghosts I had shafted The art class is an old friend, it was once a passion The holes in the canvas bled red - entitled in past-tense I buried the hatchet, only Jesus will find it But the Christians will save me as the story gets silenced Violens of violence, play where time went to die, an' I'll get rejected from heaven... ...........................'Cause only demons break hymens
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10-16-05, 01:14 AM | #2 | ||||
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IP: ABB2 431B
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10-17-05, 12:47 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: ACA7 CAC2
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10-17-05, 08:59 AM | #4 | ||||
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i was really feel'n the flow of this homie...........plus yo vocab was more then
decent...........but what stood out what ya imagry and emotion very impressed "Pigmated fragments of colours fracture this mixture As an anonymous tipster drains blood from these fixtures I throw paint outside the frame to create pictures It's my life, it shouldn't be written in scriptures" i was really feelin these four lines and thas good cuz that was just the beginning it was good all the way through damn good job homie keep it up Check links in sig for my Open Mics
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