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10-16-05, 09:33 AM
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Daubs - Samir rippin, (1st audio)
IP: 71DB 93E1
www.soundclick.com/daubs
Yeah was gonna free then wrote some too, so it aint a freestyle like i said it would be. Gimme harsh feed, so i can elevate 
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10-16-05, 09:37 AM
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IP: 71DB 93E1
Links:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211703 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211665
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10-16-05, 09:38 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: FEA7 665B
Aight...Yo Its Good Beat...,Good Lyrics Voice is koo UK is koo lol the flow is aight you need work on it seem to be not confident get more confident on the mic,be like YO really emotional n shit lol but its good for ya first audio good job keep up!
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10-16-05, 09:38 AM
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IP: 71DB 93E1
cheers mate....
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10-16-05, 09:48 AM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: 47A6 5A95
Not feeling the beat, if you wanna diss someone pick a more fast, hyped up beat you know. It allows you to put more anger in your voice, was a hard beat to spit on too because it was so slow. That's why it sounded in some places like you were just talking. Like UNF said, let us hear you cant stand this dude, let us feel the anger and shit ya know. Emotion needs to be there, definitely in a diss! And it's ya second audio hehe but it's aight though, you just made it hard on yaself with the beat actually...but keep on working ya know...
(Btw, i'm the last person to criticize on you because I'm only starting myself but anyway)
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10-16-05, 09:57 AM
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IP: 5F4F 287A
Ayo lyrics decent, but emotion up that reallly show that you dont like this nigga....flow was off a lil, precence u gotta up and delivery, however you had decent shit for youre first...keep it up...
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10-16-05, 11:57 AM
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IP: 71DB 93E1
thanks, and it was my first "proper" audio dq.
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10-16-05, 12:00 PM
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Never Around
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IP: EDF1 ACC9
hey i have that beat too...Lol...
You remind me when i was starting out.... You used the enough of the Fuck word. lol i can't quiet understand you.......Post the lyric son. cool accent though |
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10-16-05, 12:47 PM
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IP: 71DB 93E1
up........................
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10-16-05, 02:18 PM
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
werd, this was pretty dope for your first one
as dq said...u needa get a more hyped up verse.....get more lyrically heard couldnt quite understand the accent...but i listened to it 2 times so i got it....yea this is pretty good...hopefully more to come....1
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10-16-05, 02:49 PM
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Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
so thats what you sound like...
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10-16-05, 02:54 PM
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IP: 71DB 93E1
ummm yes?
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10-16-05, 05:25 PM
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IP: F91E FCB7
damn i never thaught ud sound like this man, UK voice are cool, flow is eumm dunno man, get a better mic, well not really, ur startin so ur gonna figure out how to fix quality and all so fuck the quality for now, lyrics are cool man pretty good, beat is alright too, overall keep dropin bro and keep reppin LL to the fullest
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10-16-05, 05:26 PM
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IP: 71DB 93E1
cheers mate,
i need to fuck around with vocals
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10-16-05, 05:32 PM
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listenin...
Beat is coo...I can hear hiss and pops and shit in the beginning...voice is okay...Verse kicks in...I only have time to listen to the frist verse, but anyway...flow is decent, not choppy, just needs a little bit of work...quality is lacking, but yeah...lyrics are coo...but the biggest problem is you delivery and emotion. It sounds like your whispering into that shit. Don't whisper...yell haha. Word, keep it up man. |
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