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Old 10-16-05, 03:34 PM   #1
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7 New Beats...

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I've elevated...

"I Am Insane"
"Break or Shake Me"
"Best Friend"
"Hard Music"
"Nirvana Type Ish"
"Reasons"
"Shady Beat"
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Old 10-16-05, 05:28 PM   #2
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alright ima leave feed on all of them

Shady Beat - i like the keys in the beginning. the drums that come in i dont feel that they matched until you came in with the snare. drum pattern is ok. nothing special. i like how you came in with the violin for the chorus. 6/10

Reasons - okay the intro thingy. sounds kinda cool. the strings you come in with are nice. but the notes i think are a little off. drums were basic but matched with it. the only complaint so far i think is the melody. 6/10

Hard Music - ok the strings kinda contradict the title of the beat. sounds kinda like a video game at first. dont like this beat. sounds really annoying to me. very repetetive. sounds too much like some mario brothers theme song music. the hook sucks. dont like it at all. 3/10

Nirvana Type Ish - this beat kinda sounds cool. i like the little bell sounding thing you got going on. the drums kinda sound like your other song. maybe you should add in a bass line or something. do you always have a little pause with no drums before the chorus? 6/10

Break Or Shake Me - beginning sounds like the 8 mile song. shaker makes for nice effect. drum pattern matches well. i just think that the transition from intro to verse is real boring. 5/10

Best Friend - is that an organ i hear? nice smooth sound. gives you the feel of what kinda song its gonna be. this is a no no. real boring. its real basic. 4/10

I Am Insane - you use the same sounds in a lot of your beats. drum pattern is boring. a lot of your music starts to sound the same. makes me tired cause its so repetetive. i think theyre piano sounds but its really annoying cause you only hit 2 different keys. 3/10
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Old 10-17-05, 12:34 AM   #3
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^^Hahaha brutal...

No worries haha...thanks for the feed, and I'll try to improve.
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Old 10-19-05, 01:05 AM   #4
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Shady beat - drummin has some nice sounds, but i really don't like the keys, the strings or whatever for the hook are the hhighlight, although I would switch the keys a bit... maybe not so much echo, or another style of piano. just my 2 cents. word.

reasons - i think synthy beats like this, although i can never rap on them. The drummin has a niiice underlying snare that I'm feelin for real. I like the way this is structured. And how you drop out the clap/snare at the end of every 8 bars or so. Nice switch up. word. I think i heard this one before... Did you ask me to colab on it? Word. I can't rap on these, but beats nice. word.

Nirvana - reminds me of regular nintendo with mad bass added. haha. No diss man, but I'm hatin it. Sounds are wack, and i just cant stand it. word. lol

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