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Old 10-17-05, 02:54 PM   #1
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Exclamation Intermental feat. Limited Edition - The Messiah

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Old 10-17-05, 03:02 PM   #2
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checkin it..........nice beat....inter good flow although i dont like the way u flow in theis lol...good delivery good quality its nice good lyrics.......

L.E:good flow dope emotion......dope lyrics you totally ripped this beat..nice track lol

its kool as hell dope... good trak!
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Old 10-17-05, 03:04 PM   #3
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Old 10-17-05, 03:55 PM   #4
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intro is cool with the shoutouts.

beat is real nice.

Inter > flow is nice here. emotion matches this song. its about time that you found a beat that matches your whisper sound you got. lyrics this is nice. i like your last line. real good.

hook > good lyrics. kinda weird sounding cause of the whispering

Limited > Ha Ha opening lines funny. your vocals were a bit too high. that kinda messed up the emotion. lyrics were felt. real personal. flow was on for the most part.

Inter > emotion is real good here again. flow was on point. lyrically it wasnt as good as your first verse.
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Old 10-17-05, 04:52 PM   #5
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beat is dope, made by someone with fruity huh? nice flow inter, like i said, stop puttin two voices like sayin yeah huh yeah huh lol, have prob hearin the hook, just up the volume and its gonna be dope, lmfao at limited's first verse haha the reason i spit, is the reason i shit lmfao, dope dope man, nice quality, you really elevated seriously, get at me on msn for that special collab we were talkin bout
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Old 10-17-05, 05:21 PM   #6
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Old 10-17-05, 05:40 PM   #7
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now leave feed on my beat :angry:
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Old 10-17-05, 06:34 PM   #8
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Old 10-17-05, 07:23 PM   #9
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Intermental:
I like your quality and the way your voice sounds now, the flow is pretty good man. the emotion aint to bad, it could be worked on some more but it's actually pretty good. your lyrics are pretty good too. the hook you did I like a lot, nice and smooth and a good tone very good.

Limited Edition
Your flow is very good, kept me noticin. emotion is very very good, somin you really shown in this track. the lyrics are good as well. the quality aint to bad as well, so overall I say this was a good track

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Old 10-17-05, 09:13 PM   #10
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Old 10-17-05, 09:18 PM   #11
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i like intermental's delivery on certain tracks...it matches the tone of the track

Inter: flow wasn't bad dawg, not at all...


L.E...ur highs killed my damn ears...emotion was good...flow wasn't bad either dawg


lyrics on both parts were good


beat is decent


7/10 track


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