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Old 10-18-05, 12:28 AM   #1
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Free Agent..

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Figure I'm too new here to be wanted.

But nevertheless here are 2 verses I've dropped recently,

Vs. Drop Dead..

This kids weak with hands, He needs to get his best enhanced..
..& you wouldn't see a double d if it wasn't for breast implants
Lyrics are criminal, rip threw ya mind n leave ya subliminal tense..
So much that,
.......I'll make this mothafucka' drop dead... in a more literal sense
So fly I'll grow wings, n straight ride thru ya written, I'm a falcon g
& its true "drops from above".. when I threw him off the balcony
Claims he spits the realness, But I'll disagree & allow this session
Yet he's new.......
....& all of R.V. knows he's got front lines, Like the battle section
This kids a gimmick, he don't know war.. I'll make his head pop
Don't think I'm readin ya name backwards...
...............When I say that your battle verses are all dead drops

.................................................. .................................................. ....

-Vs. Black Arts

kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black!
This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin
And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten
I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide
A showing of art?..
Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade"
This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision..
Makin' noise in raps?
Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission!

You could vote on 'em if you have time also..
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Old 10-18-05, 12:34 AM   #2
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Not bad......drop a try-out in e-style forum........
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Old 10-18-05, 12:52 AM   #3
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yea not bad at all...possibly the legacy
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Old 10-18-05, 09:15 AM   #4
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You Can come With TTI

Check Us Out mayne................
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Old 10-18-05, 12:26 PM   #5
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Join Tha Testament Dawg!!!
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Old 10-18-05, 12:35 PM   #6
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Today's verse...

-Vs. Lextownkillas

Yo..
Don't respect clowns, this cats the next down..
& I'm outta this world...
....................While this kids stuck in "Lex Town"
This kid aint shit, in this match he's comin short...
& you're outta my league?....
.............Mothafucka I'm in a whole different sport
Kid's fruity, Ya whole style? I'll fucken shoot it...
can't claim you invincible...
...................everyone knows killa's get executed
noone knows this lame, son your lackin the fame..
& I'll kill a lex town.. guess i really buried ya name
send ya to hell like the devil..kid'll get smacked back
& its true noones on ya level...
...............its actually pretty hard to get that wack*
My straps kill, you in the passed while i'm passed ill..
kids got so many short shots...
............You'd think his fucking lines were half filled!
This kids full of fillers, I'm more criminal than killas
You are who you battle?..
...We all know that's a lie, you'll never be the illist
This battle'll be the end of ya faith....
& you want sixteen lines son?....
.........Stick to bars, so its a fact you'll get ATE


* - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=211953
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Old 10-19-05, 12:47 AM   #7
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Umm..........Complexity is missing and your wordplay can be improved.

and you use simple rhyme pattern like Fame/name/ etc...


Keep droppin u aint ready for A.I Yet
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Old 10-19-05, 01:02 AM   #8
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ehhh.. that verse was a quickie.

but thanks for your opinion.
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Old 10-19-05, 09:33 AM   #9
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U Still Got A Spot In Da Testament, Hit Me Bacc Hommie
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Old 10-19-05, 09:34 AM   #10
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hes already been signed
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Old 10-19-05, 09:41 AM   #11
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2 Who??????????????
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Old 10-19-05, 11:50 PM   #12
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Chryme Syndicate....


muahaaaahhaaahaaa


Lmao.
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Old 10-23-05, 09:45 AM   #13
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Seen you on b-boys...

shoulda come to LL.
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