RV Rap Idol: Round III.

*Emcees, be sure to check in the official thread in the Rap Idol forum!
**Make sure you read the mini-tutorial I've included at the bottom of this challenge.

Challenge: Story Telling
Theme: In 16 (minimum) - 32 (max.) lines, tell a story about a burglary or robbery. The story MUST have a beginning, middle, and climax (ending). You may tell the story mainly in the 1st-person (I/we) or the 3rd person (he/they). In either case, be creative and relay the story with as much detail as possible.

Rules & Stipulations:
1. You MUST use one of the 3 beats I provide. Yes, you have a choice of

three beats this time on which to rap your story.

2. Track must be at least 2:00 minutes, no longer than 2:30.

3. NEW FACET: You MUST use these two words somewhere in your story/flow: DECISIVE & RECIPROCATE. (If you're not sure of their definition, look them up!)

4. Due Date: Sunday, October 30, 2005 by 11:59 p.m. EST.

Go here and select from 3 beat choices: Beat 1, Beat 2, or Beat 3
Http://thaq.dmusic.com

Recap from round 2: After a week of trash talking, yes, Will S. Unyu
avoided elimination. Invektive showed why he's considered one of the
best emcees on the site. And, unfortunately, E.C. and -UNF- were
sent home packing.

Entered into this round (III.) of competition:

**There is no immunity or probation this time. Anyone who gets the most
votes during this week's round of voting will be sent home packing. One
emcee will be voted off this week.

1 Invektive
2 -Ranks-
3 ThatNigga
4 Kontroversy
5 Status
6 Will S.

Voting Council for this week:
1 Tha Q
2 L. Veracity
3 Intermental
4 Limited Edition
5 Metaphor
6.E.C.
7.UNF

**Remember, if and when you're voted off, you become part of the voting
council for subsequent weeks.
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STORY TELLING: Tutorial

We've all heard the highly respected rapper Slick Rick weave intricate
stories in his classic tracks. His attention to detail is what garnered
him the title of "Best Story Teller". However, for this challenge, I've
chosen to use my favorite emcee of all time as a focus, Biggie Smalls.
Biggie is regarded as one of the best story tellers of his time because
he used so much detail in his raps. If what he was saying wasn't true,
you damn sure wouldn't know it. When he laced a line in a story, it
furthers your understanding of the plot and provides much needed
detail/information that the story couldn't survive without. In other
words, be efficient with your words, but incorporate as much detail as
possible. If you're rapping about the inside of a bank, include details
about what it looks like, how people reacted in the situation, sounds
present during the robbery, etc. Remember, the focus is story telling,
but you still must be conscious of flow/delivery/rhyming. The winner of
this week's challenge will be the emcee that brings strong fundamentals
to the track (flow/delivery/rhyming), but also a creative and well
thought-out story.

I have included a classic track by Biggie Smalls, which is also one of
your beat choices, for your convenience to appreciate and study.

Http://thaq.dmusic.com
^^Click on Biggie Smalls: "Niggas Bleed"

May the best emcee win!
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HOW TO CONTACT US:
THA Q
AIM: Five Source Ent
MSN: michaellesesne@hotmail.com
Email: michaellesesne@hotamil.com
Cell #: 301 - 806 - 6626

L. Veracity
AIM: OMFG Its TiMiD
Email: luscious_veracity@msn.com

**You may also contact L Veracity for assistance with your tracks.
Also, if you can not get in contact with me, you may submit tracks to L.
Veracity so that she can get them to me for uploading.

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I'm Talented.Period.

Five Source Ent.

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Worrrrd up G!...

This is more like it, I look forward too voting on this ish...

uppin for the emcees...

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..I Smoke..A Large Portion Of Cheeba...My Gun Games Sick...Like A Cough And A...Fever

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this will begin to separate the pretenders from the contenders

the men from the boys

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I'm Talented.Period.

Five Source Ent.

nice beat choices Q................shits gonna be interesting this week

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thanx



some of my favs

and yes...should be interesting to say the least

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I'm Talented.Period.

Five Source Ent.

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