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Okay...I know I gotta work on my flow and ish but I figured I'd let you give your opinion on this. Please gimme some constructive feed so I know what to pay attention to next time... Thx

Links:

Vendetta Ft. S-large - So Long
RV Game Demo - IDH's Entry-

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Your flow is getting better each track, the first version of this you had was bad... but you pulled this off pretty well, the emotion - YOU GOTTA LEMME HEAR YOU FIERCE! hee hee. Your presence could be worked on, but that comes with practicing and dropping tracks. You'll eventually get to that level you want to be at. Lyrically, I know this just an entry track to the tourney, so I wasn't expecting something major in the lyrics field. But lyrically it was deso (decent).

One thing bout your flow is you start off simple and feeling the beat, then you get off in some spots.. but not bad, and this is the best I heard from you by far. So keep doing what you doin', you def elevating.
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Thanks, appreciate the feed

Oh and thanks for the mixing too...nice shit

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imma peep n leave feedback a lil later..gotta do somethin

as I've stated 10000x...I want nothing to do with that "other nigga" or this tournament, but I'll drop feed on this.

I actually like this beat

vocals a touch low...I kinda like ur hazy sounding voice


need more presence with it though

ur flow is good


P.S. I'm not EVEN gonna say anything about the fact that you couldn't drop for Rv Idol but you dropped for this...Nah, I ain't gonna say ANYTHING!

haaa


solid drop though


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I'm Talented.Period.

Five Source Ent.

haha.. that shit is hot, you fell off a lil bit in a couple spots, but its pretty tight all in all...im feelin it..i think ya vocals are a lil low, but hey i aint no producer so what do i kno....anyway like i dais coo shit...

7.5/10

Thanks for feed everyone

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Listenin...vocals too low....but flow is pretty nice...but you gotta come more fierce...the beat is nice obviously...ure flow is nice...turn up ure vocals up...you sound black now ma lol....haha....likin that lil picture u have...6/10..nice ish

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www.soundclick.com/dollaback

Lmao @ you sound black...

Thanks for feed cutie

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listening...........hmm flows upped a lot u gettin better Dont like that no no no no bit but its a good track try n up ya emotion a lil lol@the outro i wud say upp ya vocals as well they a lil low...good delivery could be a lil better good presence tho keep up

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OYD MAFIA

Thanks for feed and you make sure you get better soon okay?

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were you rappin or just talkin?
and was you the girl that said she could rip this beat better than me?
or was it LV?
Either was it goes, you have to step you rap game up..WAAAY up.
but amazing enough, your quality was good.

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R.I.P. Bodie

Lmao, nah it wasn't me...that was LV yup

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lol lovign he intro sound all like im innocentish lol
flow is definately elvating work on ur presence
oh and btw im the dopest white girl
just thought id let you knwo lol
props mah

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