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10-29-05, 04:19 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Fighting for my life (A SONG)
IP: CF74 5D3A
Fighting for my life (A SONG)
HOOK: Fighting for my life while writing all the strife sincere on paper Cats fear these vapors got them toting bats spears and razors Rhyme incredible but behind schedule like a late train So my fate lame like a vampire I suck, wanna date a dame Appear before folks they clap galore but fear my quotes and some Threw beer down my throat that shit choked me felt like a bum Now dwelling in the club, smelling like Bud is truly dumb// HOOK: Fighting for my life while writing all the strife sincere on paper Cats fear these vapors got them toting bats spears and razors Designed a plan that was a crime before man and god, stands Odd I was to sell hash and make swell cash but got hand- Cuffed and stuffed behind bars, wrong place to land Now face income reductions because of slum corruption damn Now locked up the food old and greasy and that got stole By ALEBISI from the movie OZ my plate an empty soul// HOOK: Fighting for my life while writing all the strife sincere on paper Cats fear these vapors got them toting bats spears and razors |
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10-29-05, 06:05 AM | #2 | ||||||
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10-29-05, 09:57 AM | #3 | ||||
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meh..............not really a song.........and structure was off.........decent worduse
but i've seen you post better in other peoples OMs sorry i wasn't feel'n this at all not fo real
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10-29-05, 02:33 PM | #4 | |||||||
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gladbag stop rapping
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10-29-05, 08:54 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Thanks Fo Rth Eresponse Multi Come On For The Othjer Cats
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10-29-05, 09:45 PM | #6 | ||||
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just no look'n fo any enimies on this site i have enough on others..........beef is endless and pointless.........you just didn't structure it as if it was a song..........its more of a free verse of spoken word
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