No beef intended but if you see it that way just set it up


Check It...


20 Grand dont act amazed, You a soft dog and i do finish poodles
Aint Oodles, But you are famous for your two minute noodle
C.A.L.I who gassed you up, Im sorry but you've been lied to
My punches'll easily hit you to Paris so you can see an Eiffel
Mimesis ya lyrics.. You Straight-Jack-It, this bitch must be crazy
Dont ya know ill give your body more bends than Mercedes
Kon.Tay.Juz stay battlin newbies, Against him im savage and moody
Fighting dirty. Coming with cheaper shots than Amateur movies
E.C ya whole style is a joke .... So it'll feel great to crack it
Make ya spine an addiction .... So i can break the habit
Nat.K this is ya big chance to diss me, But ya dying on the set
You're like an old-fashioned fisher .... Stop relying on the net
DQ get dissed in this verse and she can run home with some thrills
Ya know my OM's are like doctors patients, theyre known to come ill
Gotta take it easy, Ya know i always spit something that kills
KOOL COL-B should paint a picture of wack, And brush up on his skills
Even before this shit started, I knew Willa only spit garbage
So ill put flames through her chest to leave her light hearted
After this is done, Im'a be walking away with bragging rights
Cuz like porn vets in virgin roles, Veracity is just acting tight


More to come daily

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pretty good open mic ill look out for the next one

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Not to actually really rag on your verse. But it was weak.

Most of the punches were just plain, they lacked anything really hard hitting.
I've actually seen you do a lot better, these just seem like some off the top 30 second punches, basically like you're writing the first thing that comes to your head. The flow was nice, you had a few multies you threw in, but you need to come more creative and shit, lay off so many played concepts.

In particular...

Kon.Tay.Juz stay battlin newbies, Against him im savage and moody
Fighting dirty. Coming with cheaper shots than Amateur movies
DQ get dissed in this verse and she can run home with some thrills
Ya know my OM's are like doctors patients, theyre known to come ill
After this is done, Im'a be walking away with bragging rights
Cuz like porn vets in virgin roles, Veracity is just acting tight

^^ those were all weak, and the concepts were played to fuck.

You either need to up your shit, or just actually put some effort into dissing people if you actually want these open mics to be dope.

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well i just keyed it up i was bored, but im actually gonna take time to write the others, thats only 10 people theres a thousand more


[Evil Laugh]

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Word. I'm a be doing a long ass crew diss on Living Legends.

I wonder if people will take the time to read it.

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i'll read it cuz im bored as usual......and intel...........i was feel'n it but plz take the time fo the next couple........look'n forward to see how this turns out

*wonders how many people will respond*

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HAHAHAHA...

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But really,If you had put more time into this OM,then It'd be way better

yea quick 15 mins, but im already working on the next 3 i got 1 and a half done already and the first one is crazy

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Yo homie this was pretty tight , kinda mad at how i wasnt in this ..but yeah i was really feeling some diss's some were alittle fillers , but others were hitten hard..you had a couple nice punchlines , good personals..overall nice job flow keep it up

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After this is done, Im'a be walking away with bragging rights
Cuz like porn vets in virgin roles, Veracity is just acting tight
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^^thats been bitten, reworded n tossed in the mix to diss tonnes of bitches
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no beef flow...but wtf..... i rather see a new approach
to a punch then readin the same trash twice.....pc

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

nah not bitten flipped concept ive seen something similar to this and i seen something similar to the 2nd bar

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