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Old 11-18-05, 06:38 AM   #1
Dusty Skidz
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Talking Breaktime Rhyme

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Uk Representin' Dusty Motherfuckin' Skidz With Another One. Wrote This On My Ciggarette Break So It's A Bit Rough. Let Me Know What You Think. Big Up Yourselves!

I Got Love For The Game,
Ain't Got Love For The Fame,
I'll Always Be Me,
Ain't Ever Gonna Change

I'm A Child Of The Light,i'm Illuminati,
Motherfuckers In Shadows Just Wanna Drink And Party

And I'm A Big Man,
I'm 6 Foot 2,
And If You Think I'm Gonna Fall I Got News For You

Cos The Bigger They Are The Harder They Bring It,
You Motherfuckers Can't Rap, All You Do Is Sing It

And If You Wanna Bust Guns Then It's It's Guns We Bust,
I'll School Your Whole Team Not To Fuck Wit' Us.

And The Ones I Love Is The Ones I Trust,
Fool, You Ain't Shit, All You Do Is Cuss

Keep Talkin' Shit And It's Shit You Get,
I'll School Your Fools About Repect.

Cos I'm The Real Criminal,
My Rhymes Are Subliminal,
I Stay On Top,
Competition Is Minimal.

You're Best To Stay Warm Case The Brain Goes Slow,
And If I See Your Face Then It's Brains We Blow,

I'm Cold As Ice,
Jus Lettin' You Know,
I'm Gonna Knock You Out, My Mama Told Me So

This Shit Is Wild,
This Shit Is The Truth,
I'll Get You Fucked Like A Bitch And Thrown Off A Roof

And My Point Of View,
Check Out My Theory,
Is That You Punks Are Bitches And Your Bitches Is Scary

And If You Want Trouble,
You'll Be Gettin'double Cos My Dj's Here Today,

And If You Want A Beating,
It's My Dj You Should Be Meeting And He's Always Gonna Be That Way

It's Way Past Your Bedtime,
Everybody Out Past Twelve Gettin' Stuck,
I Don't Give A Fuck

Close You Windows Cos I Climb Balconies,
I'm Still Livin', It's Fools That Bleed
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Old 11-18-05, 06:58 AM   #2
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nice work bro, little bit scrappy but very good for early work.

I'm A Child Of The Light,i'm Illuminati,
Motherfuckers In Shadows Just Wanna Drink And Party

^^^^ liked this the most i think. You could use a little structure help and you got madd potential. Get yaself in a crew then improve as you go

ps tryout with gods of war, we can assist ya in your elevation quest
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Old 11-18-05, 08:28 AM   #3
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Look rap is a classic mission get enthusiastic recognition
By a loud applause it’s a proud cause to be in a position
To deliver rhymes and shiver minds like cold weather
Bold and clever with verse forever first my scroll is never
The worse flow loose like silk and produce milk like a girl’s
Breast and hurl mess on microphones that strike the world
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Old 11-18-05, 08:34 AM   #4
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Look rap is a classic mission get enthusiastic recognition
By a loud applause it’s a proud cause to be in a position
To deliver rhymes and shiver minds like cold weather
Bold and clever with verse forever first my scroll is never
The worse flow loose like silk and produce milk like a girl’s
Breast and hurl mess on microphones that strike the world



this guy's dropping some madd stuff everywhere.

Two good verse in one thread. -liking it
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