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Best Way i Can
IP: 3240 794D
Best Way I Can
Chorus- The best way I can tell you I love you is....... Telling you with a straight face look you dead in the eye........ The best way I can show you I love you is.... Give you my loyalty in when your face of hate when girls lie..... The best way I can make you feel loved is.... Greet you with my hugs and kisses no matter you health......... The best way I can make our love last is....... Give you my all making sure you dont fight the world yourself.... Verse 1- If I ever had something to die for it would be for eight letters..... R.A.N.E.E.C.I.A. to my final day I pray we forever be together... Through the thickest weather to the slickest wind breeze.......... My heart freeze with your gentle words that put my mind at ease It just feel so good I hope God let us be enternaly free at best.... No testing my gangsta with them bitches I put that pimp shit to rest To bring peace to your chest I still keep it thug with 4 revolvers around you My mind, body, soul, and my heart targeted directly at my boo...... (Chorus) Verse 2- There's nothing new,my love will always be true to the very end..... Who would have ever guess we'd be lovers from just being friends Even when I was positive I knew that I could never love another..... I found all I need in you beleive in you when you say you love no other I beleive i dont want your to love you brother or mother baby Im selfish Love sick when im away from you B.G.'s when Im near I swear im helpless Smother you in hugs and kisses try to give nothing but love with your wishes If they could measured in jewls &riches I swear I'd make you a diamound princess (Chorus) Verse 3- Even though I had true love before I've never loved someone so much You make me want to changemy T's and bubble jackest to button ups First month with you I already had my mind set there will be noone else Check my closet baby, you'll see my controllers are already on the shelf Im not a boy no more, you know the type thats afraid to show emotion Your love and your future happyness are the things that keep me going Its miracle how you quickly changed a nigga to a man I just dont understand I know I can't repay you but I promise baby im going to do it the best way I can
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IP: 28AD 5545
I just made this for my girl in less than 20 mins.....I putting it in her get well card....she gots the flu and shyt and im just tryna make her feel good....but hey where else to get opinions than www.Rapverse.com Drop feedback
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IP: 28AD 5545
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IP: 28AD 5545
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: C315 507B
This was a pretty good OM.Content was really good.Should put a smile in ya' girl's face when she reads it.LOL.
The verses were kinda short for a song tho..but it's all good. Some lines were kinda stretched to...maybe shorten them up or use multis for a better rhyme scheme or something.. But..all in all..good shit. 1 |
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Light Weight
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IP: 8FDE 6314
ncie drop homie i feel da content flow was good but like homeboy said try sum multies for stretched lines but trust me im guilty of it 2 wit multies....jus cuz a nigga got lots 2 say wit everyday bein a thug niggaz las i put my thoughts 2 flow so if i die my legecy live on through spirit n soul...by the way peep my never die alone,my try out verse for gods of war n my otha drops n double check da one u left wit me n re-think ur theory of i need much improvement n rethink your decision 4 gods of war cuz niggaz jus dont pick up n e 1 2 join they crew peace
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IP: 3240 794D
I realise something about text rappin....it nevers sounds the same to anothers ears as the actual wrighter. Dosent look like it flows right either on pen N paper.....but when i audio it....the lines dosent sound stretch....maybe its da way i rapped it or something....but as soon as i get an monthly account on soundclick i drop it for yall to hear
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IP: D40E 67D5
this was an AIGHT drop homez nice vocab and rhytm...........................liked it it was classic u know.........................
yo upp Pocket change man.............in ur sig.
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Light Weight
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IP: CF74 5D3A
Look my mind in rotation while you blind on probation
Write tender crap an offender of rap so change location Walk around filthy and founded guilty of a rhyme crime Need a wild trial my child to redeem yourself sign of the times You talk gay and walk astray in a tight skirt so your night work Unacceptable not a thug clever get love letters from men you jerk Standing on a street corner looking for a meat donor yall be alert He has the plan of a fag talking about handbags come on you sissy Whiskey on your breath risky and not deft your brains are twisty A whack fatality and lack originality so like an actress need To practice quoting from books you promoting hooks indeed That sounds wrong your girl in a brown throng so I proceed To throw cock around your home laying her down strong |
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IP: 3240 794D
^^^^ what was the point of that
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppin................atleast give feed and advice
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin dis i better catch feed from My niggas up in Pocket Change
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