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Old 12-09-05, 01:26 PM   #1
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"Super Gutta" feat. Apexx

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a lil club joint I did. Trackbangas on the beat. and Apexx on the hook

Responded to: Tito - How Yall Niggaz Want it & TonySelf - Smoke to this


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Old 12-09-05, 01:31 PM   #2
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beat hott ...intro is hot simple ryme scheme like da voice effects, seem a lil over the top not much.... hook is hot all tho treble on hook is loud ..ja this was ur style definately solid ..some slight mispronunciation but this is that bass thumpin hood rider i like that.
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Old 12-09-05, 01:37 PM   #3
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Aiite im def feelin this like I told u on aim...production wise this beat is mad crazy...lovin this beat..track bangas now how to set it off...i like ure style on this that NY style..im feelin that alot..presence is koo...i like how u own the beat....and the way u delivered the lyrics were def good...was deff deff feeling the flow on this..like u said thas yo forte...and no doubt bout that...didnt fall offf...lyrics are koo..this track is fire from ure bit..and then apexx...got an amazing presence on the mic..a very nice hook he laid out...im def feelin it...def summin i can hear on the radio/tv...

Production: 9/10
Flow: 10/10
Presence: 8/10
Delivery: 7.5/10
Emotion: 8/10

overall I give this track 9/10

this was hot fo sho...1
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Old 12-09-05, 01:42 PM   #4
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Word peeped this track a while back...

Beat is dope...Flow comes in...good flow, nice and smooth. Clean change ups, solid delivery.

Apexx killed the hook...niceley done.

Gutta...your dope as hell. Good flow, good lyrics, the works. Only comlaint I have is your quality...

Good track. Keep it up.
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Old 12-09-05, 01:44 PM   #5
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lol, thats always the problem..lol
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Old 12-10-05, 06:18 AM   #6
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lol, thats always the problem..lol


haha was the problem, lol. CHEA this track was ill man, but we already knwo the plan for the vocals. Damn, this makes me wanna post up Lethal Dosage. "Kiss of the White Widow" ladies and gentlemen, out soon. Gutta. Apexx. What more do I have to say?
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Old 12-10-05, 09:46 AM   #7
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not feelin' the synth sounds..your voice is too loud..flow is on..lear jet line was nice...voice is nice...chorus is nice...2nd verse..flow is sicker here...now n later whips..i herd it b4 somewere..hook comes in....3rd verse..nice multies...flow is always on..all i can say is work on deeper lyrics..nuthin realy cought my ear..but as u said this was a club joint so...


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Old 12-11-05, 03:09 PM   #8
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believe me - lyrically I could get deep. I chose not to on joints like this cause the shit goes over some people's head. Majority of my songs are deep and lyrically inclined. But, in the music industry nowadays people wanna bounce.. not cry. Thanks for the feed though
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