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12-19-05, 08:01 PM
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The Original Half Ass King
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Spek & Ysdat - What I Found With My Soul
IP: 7C6D 1B8D
What I Found With My Soul - Moment of Seperation - Alone in my created hell hole, I am speechless in need of expression Misplaced lessons brought me right to a point of lifes discretion Warped mind runs rampant,creating thoughts of the past few days Back arching shiver's crunch my stiff spine,I witness black sun rays Snapping into a moment of life, its mearly my bloodless virgin birth I feel unsure who I am, grasiously try to stub this serpant curse Undoubtly have many followers,but im mearly a follower myself Feeling sick inside like my souls forming a hollow in my health Gazing into blackness surrounding, my eyes malfunction insain My hands bleed the blood of life,while my heart beat's life pain I feel pinned in a position like a murder'd picture on hells wall Minds hearing wicked static like the devils out of range cell calls Eye movements rapidly fast, but it seems im here to die so slow They say faith has its up and downs, How deep can I fucking go? As I hear tyrants yelling my name holding there flame torches high Desperatly try to reach to my soul,to find my position and explain why Blindly feel a sudden emptyness inside like erdoded corpse in casket Glaring eyes stare as I pass out , visions of a child, floating in a river basket - State of Seperation - Looking down at unconscious states, I watch my body disintegrate Gathering memories of miracles, and disregard every sin I'd make Bloodied, bruised, drama convinced me I was in the showman's shoes Incapable of ascending higher, still weary from Romans and Jews Left suspended in such a way, I notice a fight for every breath More confused than my own mind, am I living, or is this death? Sunrays form salted sweat on my brow, as I begin a violent cry Frustrated and helpless, no matter how loud still silent, why? The far horizon holds a church, just above it stands a steeple Realizing in this moment, Ill sacrifice this body for my people I fly beside my carcass, an dissolve inside from a touched cheek Finally, my eyes were open, releasing just enough energy to speak: "O Father, lover of my soul, Let me to thy bosom fly, While the nearer waters roll, While the tempest still is high! Hide me, O my Saviour, hide, Till the storm of life is past, Safe into the haven guide, O receive my soul at last!" These final words I spoke, provoked cracked whips and heavy stones Yet again I leave my body, which now is only blood and broken bones Townsfolk truly feel they've won, for me this is nothing like a loss Evaporating into the sky, witnessing my body still nailed to the cross. "...and his name still lives on." |
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12-19-05, 09:58 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 50C5 F024
Damn boi that was very deep stuff you wrote therr
alothugh i can barely understand it lol *i'm not relli dat smart mkay? but nice open mic |
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12-20-05, 07:52 AM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 11AF 50EC
wow ok...time to get out da MAGNIFINE GLASS....lol just messin guys.....dis sum some dope shit.....vocab n structure were both hott.....luv da emotion too dis piece....keep up da good work guys.....1
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12-20-05, 03:47 PM
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IP: 39AB 2C8C
Drop two links or this will be closed
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The Competition
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12-20-05, 10:13 PM
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The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
^ Be nice to me blunt, lol...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2584711 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2584713 THERE! Last edited by Spektikul : 12-20-05 at 10:19 PM. |
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12-21-05, 01:49 PM
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IP: 52E6 335C
wow, brining out the emotion in this one. I really loved the way it was structured, something very near to perfect, but since noone ever is, this is as close as ive seen it get. I loved the vocabulary use in this and it looked like words really fit in. Anyways its my frist time here and i read a lot of stuff before posting a reply to this one, this is just crazy, great drop.
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12-21-05, 07:37 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 52E6 335C
hey i dunno if its to much to ask but could u reply on my post (sig) since did on yours
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12-21-05, 11:40 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
for those who domt know, my verse is first, speks second. But spek allways shows me up
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12-28-05, 07:01 PM
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The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
lol ^
...yeah right, this whole piece was dopeness. It would be even iller if we got more feedback yo. |
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12-28-05, 08:49 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: F1FC 4749
This was nice, i like the opening of the topic and the vocab used in this piece. overall it was exactly what i expected, good and entertaining. good job spek....keep it up.
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01-03-06, 01:39 PM
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The Original Half Ass King
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IP: 7C6D 1B8D
Dont sleep on this yall...........................
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