Have you ever felt rage pumping through your vains
and get nasty thoughts in ur head thinking about blood stains
And everyday it seems to rain your life don't feel important
You just feel like you've been put here in shear torment
People seem to be ignoring and you take shit every morning
as soon as you wake up and it continues every dourining
Our lifes are filled with pain it always remains the same
You've got to stay on top cuz life is like one big game
If you can't try get through it it's gonna be 2 late to do it
I express myself with music so I don't care about earth screw it
I got damages from the past that'll haunt me for life
But im lucky to find a girl so that I could find a way to survive
All my life i have been deprived can't believe it im still alive
cuz a few years ago I would've been happy to use a knife
My stress level is like building blocks and it's about to rumble
god put me on this planet for my mistakes to fall down and tumble
I got alot of things on my mind but I create lines that make u break
I don't give a fuck about all the bull shit that I have to take
Im telling you to bring the hate I won't allow myself to be fake
If you can't beef wid me here argue wid me on the show rickie lake
My soul is colder then antartica and it's tough for it to melt
Sinner just leave u wid no help n hanging u down wid a belt
I'll cut you leave wounds in u and put salt in ur blood stream
I'll laugh in your face when I see your stupid ass scream
you best be scared of me cuz I'll turn up inside ya dream
I'll have a chainsaw in my hand not allowing you to sleep

feed back plz..........................

tight ending i liked it bit drawn out in sum lines but i do dat 2 sum times...n e ways tell dex n big city im out the crew...niggaz aint doin shit n its way 2 dead man im do shit on my own or get in anotha crew who cares i dont certain god knows for the most part ive had 2 do shit in life on my own...n e ways peace homie good drop

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alrite thanks allik for the feed and it's ashame that the crew isn't active cuz it would be good if it was. If I see some of ur drops I'll remember to give you some feed.

`u'd have 2 wait til i drop sumtin new cuz everytrhing i had open was closed by blunted 4 suppsedly not havin no links in my sig yet i got like 4-5 o r at least i did at the time...lol

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i think it was a really decente piece of lyrics, some rhymes felt a bit forced but it was just a coupple of them, some were a little symplistic and gave a feelign of just to rhyme sake force. Other then that i liked the use of words and the expression of rage, but it kinda lacked a stronger punch.

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yo u mind replyin to my drop since i replyed to urs?

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yea sure m8 I'll drop some feed just give me the link plz.