niceness @ calam coming back...lol,he proly dont remember me tho...

nice beat man..nice scratching n shit....

1st dude..nice flow..damn..nice ass flow..lyrics is iight...voice is nice..flow like water man...nice shit bro..

2nd dude...nice voice...lol @ limestone line..damn metas is sick yo...tick tick
LOL...flow is hot...like the adlibs to..damn..ur nice man...

3rd...


who can rip verses vaster then the avarage man? bite u wit fangs n magle your hands? calamity can the calamity man !!
lol
good drop

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

^lmao.. but appreciate the feed man. upppp........

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Listening...

Like the beat...

Spul...flow is pretty good...lyrics are pretty cool...me personally I think the delivery lacked a little, but it's still straight...pretty good.

Calam...Havent heard you in quite some time...good flow, good lyrics...nice quality...

Overall, good track.

Keep it up.

Return the favor on "Lasts of December"

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217540

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^ehhh thanks for the feed.......

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Spul - Wasn't really feeling your voice with this beat...sometimes I couldn understand what you was saying, flow was good enunciation was ass tho, lol. Weapon of choice line was coo, verse was iight...wasn't special to me.

Calam - Verse was coo, flow was good, aint have no lines that made me go streaking in the middle of winter, but this shit was coo. Voice is nice on the track, no homo, b.

Overall - Ok to me, it's like some shit I'd listen to like once in a while, not much though.
Good mixing @ whoever did the chorus.

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ROLMFAO!!!ah'ight spul...I was the one who turned u on to Rakim an then u gon remix this classic....quality is decent.....flow is good but repetitive....delivery was almost on point it lacked energy..laid back was perfect for beat if only u had subtlely animated ya voice more....pronounciation went backwards tho..u had been spitting wit fully pronounced words lately but on this one u had a couple "wgfpggqwf" lines...that had me like huh?....addlibs shoulda been more energetic....stuffy nose line was played to shit but it shows u starting to grasps metas better...calam...the way u opened was real shaky in first 4 bars...then u settled into the beat....flow was koo but not spectacular following first 4 an feel of in a few spots, seemed u was going for a lil bit of a offsnare flow but u didn't follow rhythm of the beat....delivery was koo but didn't really mesh wit beat too well an vocals was tad loud....lyrically u had a bunch of eh punches....fundamentally sound but jus not great punches..jus common similies I've heard on countless mixtapes an forums....the lil sound effects an libs u did was tight tho....dun get me wrong not bad tho....overall this was a decent listen that could use sum touching up....

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^ Good look on feed.. cant say i agree with the flow part, but we all hear diff things when we flow.. thats what makes us all original.. but i respect ya opinion.. and the lyrics part i know i can work on..Good looks on the feed..

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

yea, thanks to both for feede

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Now this is a good track. Fuckin nice both of you.

Spul, that verse is ill. Nice shit man. Calam same with you, that limestone opening is fuckin nice.

Dope ass Track. I'm downloadin em all when I get back

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