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Old 01-02-06, 06:26 PM   #1
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This Is How We Do Remix To The Remix

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Chorus

West Coast Uhh
Verbal I Love
Juelz Cartel, Pop It Open Cuz
Murder One-O-One
Faggots Worth None
When We Come You Cat's Run
Fuck Yall Uhh
Pistol Whipped Uhh
Breaking Necks Dawg With Th Snub
Show Us Love
Ready For Us Uhh
Verbal I Cuz
Y'Know We Walking With A Snub
Leave Your Body In The Trunk
Got My Semi With A Pump
I Was Merking Pricks, Before Troop Was Saying Nuuuhhf
Man Pass The Stuhhf
It's Juelz Bitch Yall Don't Want Whaa
Fuck The Punk
Shitting On Cat's Uhhh
Hating Cause I'm Fly Like Uhh
Hitting You With Slugs
Mouth With A Blunt
Fuck Yall Cunts
Snatch Your Life Try To Frunt
(Come In)
I Board You On A Plane So You Elevate
Fuck It Son Let It Escalade
In One Blink Man, I'll Leave You Ass Blazed
I'll Put You Crspy Cream Faggots All Up In The Glaze
It Must Be,Ya Grease, It's Crispy, It's Easy
I'll Tell Your Pops His Sons A Giiiiiiirl
You Not Fucking With The West
Semi Hanging On My Clip,Right Mic On My Left
Bitch I'm So Hood
Make This Shit Good
I Won't Do Nothing About
Mouths Might Pop Off
Then Clips Gone Pop Off
Punk Bitches Will Get Layed The Fuck Out
They Call Me New Dunny
I've Came Out But Still Whack
I Suck Ass, But They Got No Facts
I Got Two Bats, That'll Leave Skulls Cracked
Fuck This Rap Shit Yall Still Straight Ass

Chorus

I Put Automatic Semi's On The Side Of Both Doors
Them Thick Shells Will Leave Ya Whole Top Blown
In One Shot Man, Yo Ass So Gone
Rb Got Cowards Rolling Fresh Out The Floor
You Lucky,We Easy,We Tipsy, It's Easy
Guess Your Crew Still Full With Giiiiiirls
You Now Fucking With The Guess
Bling Like What, Bitch I'm Still Fucking Blesses
With Me Uhh
Buisy Uhh
Fuck Yall I'm Still Living In The Slum
Chain Rapping Slick Uh
Fuck Yall One-On-One
Make A Move Faggot, I Got A Pump
Hommie It's Change Time
Your 10 Second Done
Call Untold, And We'll Teach You How To Stunt
It Took Me Once
Did It Withing Months
Fucking With Shazz, Yall Like Whhha?
Thinking We'll Frunt
I'll Hit You With A Pump
Thinking I Wont Stunt
Smash You Up In The Dump
Cowards Said What?
Trunk With A Pump
Got To Stick Together
I'm Still Much Better
Re Visisting Meda's
The Beef Get's Better
I Move Like Jeda's
Don't Mistake Wether
We Malice
We Still Gone Chalenge
We Average
More Skill Then Other Faggots In This Bitch EL CARTEL!!!!!!!!!

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Old 01-02-06, 06:31 PM   #2
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Shit came from the heart
Your write like jayz, kinda short lines, i guess depends on the beat, Good flow vocab was right,Good Imagery with this espically "Fucking With Shazz, Yall Like Whhha?" Word. Remix to the Remix? lmao
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Old 01-03-06, 05:11 PM   #3
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Good Looking Home Boy Yeaaaaa
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Old 01-04-06, 06:35 PM   #4
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Nice shit man. I liked the short lines, thought it was different since aint no one really write they stuff like that on here. Vocab was cool for this piece, i guess it would flow, like Shazz said it depends on the beat u kno. Otha than that it was cool. Nice drop man. Please return the favor on my open mic called Runnin' or Ready For War Pt. 1 whichever u want. Links in my sig. Peace.

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Old 01-05-06, 08:02 AM   #5
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good piece right here........average vocab; uhm da flow(i dunno)...maybe it'd make more since if it was audio.......but overall dope piece....keep up da work n plz RTF on my open mic........1
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Old 01-05-06, 04:17 PM   #6
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This was a pretty decent drop for the this is how we do song..some lines really didnt fit very well but it was overall a pretty good drop..nice way you keep the origional flow of the song with the Uh...and One-oO-One ..pretty good ..keep it up
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