Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
01-16-06, 01:57 AM | #1 | |||||||
|
4. Mimesis vs. 25. Trey Methodz
IP: A0C8 44A9
Check in by Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Drop verse by Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time. 20 Lines. No Recycling. No Biting. No Feeding. Good Luck.. Come Dope. |
|||||||
01-16-06, 02:39 AM | #2 | ||||
Moderator
|
IP: 6EB9 28C9
In.
King Solo can't vote due to him pulling massive bitch moves. Last edited by Mimesis : 01-17-06 at 02:00 PM. |
||||
01-16-06, 03:37 AM | #3 | |||||||
the real man of steel
|
IP: 231D FEDA
Check..........
__________________
E-Style
|
|||||||
01-18-06, 12:07 AM | #4 | |||||||
the real man of steel
|
IP: 231D FEDA
Werd......lets go
Dude...i aint get all the hype..to me ur jus another john doe I made him look so bad at the sweet 16...mtv had to cancelled the show My Punchs need sparkin....i'm usin ur head as the flare B my punchs'll Send u so far diaw south...The Suns'll charge him air fare* Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's... ............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof Ur houston jerzy is matchin the heater...when i put the rocket to ur chest T's mac made mim do such a wind mill.. ..............the nba put him in the slam duck contest son dont hate...cuz ya sis wanna play doctor wit me I only charged yah family a checkup....cuz i felt she was a flat fee Damn the Secrets out....but the rest might cause doom Yea i Always Kiss up to mim's... ........Sister when were alone in Her room Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again so ur predicted to win, but he prolly think i wont bother knowin u wont come thru for the kids, like a bad father i'm wrapin his verse...cuz thats wat i do on a battle site I said lets get it crackin....an he proceded to light up his pipe Stfu can get it too....yah bodys iced...an i'm meltin d's tricks I put his grill in the wall so many times....nelly'll ask him to do a remix *boris diaw on the suns
__________________
E-Style
|
|||||||
01-18-06, 05:54 PM | #5 | |||||||
Moderator
|
IP: 2361 1E5E
Quote:
Quote:
http://www.freestyling.com/printthr...p?threadid=2464 Check it out.. We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first While I decided to prewrite.. ..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse I know my left hurts.. I'm shutting you up, sick of you talking, son I won't tell you this one story.. I'll just push you headfirst off of one And I saw the predictions.. saw some doubt about me ripping this kid It laid out as a close, line.. but that's just what I'm hitting you with I'm dominating.. with all the bullshit he states he'll be tried for treason I need a place to post my verses.. you need to provide a reason But yo, I pound keys.. sending cats in a spot between life and death Ray pounds keys because he's blind as hell and has to bite instead Our rankings tell the story.. your punches were pourin, but killed Cause I can drop this quarter.. just by using a quarter of my skill And SunU invited you to E Style.. but now we see Will's fucked Cause loyalty to the squad doesn't mean SHIT when you still suck Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment I'm ranked as one of the best.. while nothing that you say is art I'm beating this fag, TM.. while all he wants to do is trade marks Quote:
And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match |
|||||||
01-18-06, 06:29 PM | #6 | |||||||
I see dumb people
|
IP: AF88 6884
word to my e-style nuccas. let me break this shiznit down like sausages nah mean?
Trey: Dude...i aint get all the hype..to me ur jus another john doe I made him look so bad at the sweet 16...mtv had to cancelled the show ehh... shit's coo... 5/10 My Punchs need sparkin....i'm usin ur head as the flare B my punchs'll Send u so far diaw south...The Suns'll charge him air fare* nice try @ wordplay.... it's coo..... 6/10 Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's... ............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof lol haha pretty nice.... 6/10 Ur houston jerzy is matchin the heater...when i put the rocket to ur chest T's mac made mim do such a wind mill.. ..............the nba put him in the slam duck contest damn, nice wordplay.... good.... 7/10 son dont hate...cuz ya sis wanna play doctor wit me I only charged yah family a checkup....cuz i felt she was a flat fee it's decent...... 5/10 Damn the Secrets out....but the rest might cause doom Yea i Always Kiss up to mim's... ........Sister when were alone in Her room haha nice.... not really diss to him tho, but funny 6/10 Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again lmao haha, that made me laugh... good..... 8/10 so ur predicted to win, but he prolly think i wont bother knowin u wont come thru for the kids, like a bad father ehh..... to basic.... 4/10 i'm wrapin his verse...cuz thats wat i do on a battle site I said lets get it crackin....an he proceded to light up his pipe it's ok....... 4/10 Stfu can get it too....yah bodys iced...an i'm meltin d's tricks I put his grill in the wall so many times....nelly'll ask him to do a remix it's coo....... 5/10 OVerall, you started decent in beginning, then got dope near middle, and fell off a lil near end. overall pretty nice verse good shit. 56/100 56% Aiight mimesis: We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first While I decided to prewrite.. ..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse it's ok.... 4/10 I know my left hurts.. I'm shutting you up, sick of you talking, son I won't tell you this one story.. I'll just push you headfirst off of one lmao haha....... good... 9/10 And I saw the predictions.. saw some doubt about me ripping this kid It laid out as a close, line.. but that's just what I'm hitting you with good wordplay... 5/10 I'm dominating.. with all the bullshit he states he'll be tried for treason I need a place to post my verses.. you need to provide a reason ehh.... not feeling it too much.. 4/10 But yo, I pound keys.. sending cats in a spot between life and death Ray pounds keys because he's blind as hell and has to bite instead it's ok, got personal there.... 5/10 Our rankings tell the story.. your punches were pourin, but killed Cause I can drop this quarter.. just by using a quarter of my skill haha, nice wordplay..... 7/10 And SunU invited you to E Style.. but now we see Will's fucked Cause loyalty to the squad doesn't mean SHIT when you still suck ehh...... 4/10 Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment it's ok.... 4/10 I'm ranked as one of the best.. while nothing that you say is art I'm beating this fag, TM.. while all he wants to do is trade marks haha nice..... 6/10 And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match lmao shit had me rollin' dope. 9/10 overall, you didn't come as hard as i thought you would. Really unconsistent. like you had some dope lines, but then you had some wackish ones later on, but overall, pretty nice verse. not your best. 57/100 57 % Overall, mimesis edged this one out. shit was really close. That closer saved you imo, mim. But overall good job to both..... v/Mimesis
__________________
^wordddd 2x Best audio head (Jan '05, Jan '06)
KORV 2 Final 4 KORV 0 and KORV 3 Champion First 1-2-1 champ 3x Best Audio collaboration... (August '05-October '05) |
|||||||
01-18-06, 06:39 PM | #7 | |||||||
Banned
|
IP: A1F4 7B78
Quote:
your wordplay isnt' bad just doesnt come hard enough. The bolded line was your best Quote:
Those ^bolded lines were nice. More consisten & although it wasn't a ripping like I've seen you do before it did the job. V/ Mimesis. Good battle. |
|||||||
01-19-06, 01:56 AM | #8 | |||
Skadoosh!
|
IP: BC34 84D0
Dude...i aint get all the hype..to me ur jus another john doe
I made him look so bad at the sweet 16...mtv had to cancelled the show ok, but the concept of using an MTV show or some kind of reality show to make a punch has been overdone now.. My Punchs need sparkin....i'm usin ur head as the flare B my punchs'll Send u so far diaw south...The Suns'll charge him air fare* this was ok, the wordplay was barely acceptable though.. Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's... ............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof i like these types of punches, this cud've been executed better though.. Ur houston jerzy is matchin the heater...when i put the rocket to ur chest T's mac made mim do such a wind mill.. ..............the nba put him in the slam duck contest NICE!! this had good wordplay in.. son dont hate...cuz ya sis wanna play doctor wit me I only charged yah family a checkup....cuz i felt she was a flat fee punches using mim's sister are getting played.. Damn the Secrets out....but the rest might cause doom Yea i Always Kiss up to mim's... ........Sister when were alone in Her room read previous comment.. Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again Lmfao!!! an element of gayness to it, but funny nonetheless.. so ur predicted to win, but he prolly think i wont bother knowin u wont come thru for the kids, like a bad father this was weak, and worded terribly in the second line.. i'm wrapin his verse...cuz thats wat i do on a battle site I said lets get it crackin....an he proceded to light up his pipe played concept, worded weak to.. Stfu can get it too....yah bodys iced...an i'm meltin d's tricks I put his grill in the wall so many times....nelly'll ask him to do a remix this was ok, nothing really special.. VS. We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first While I decided to prewrite.. ..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse kinda weak opener, not your best.. I know my left hurts.. I'm shutting you up, sick of you talking, son I won't tell you this one story.. I'll just push you headfirst off of one trey had one of these types of punches, this one was dope as fuck and worded a whole lot better.. And I saw the predictions.. saw some doubt about me ripping this kid It laid out as a close, line.. but that's just what I'm hitting you with decent flip into a punch, "close line/clothesline" wordplay was ok.. I'm dominating.. with all the bullshit he states he'll be tried for treason I need a place to post my verses.. you need to provide a reason a little funny, but again not your best.. But yo, I pound keys.. sending cats in a spot between life and death Ray pounds keys because he's blind as hell and has to bite instead Lol, the whole Ray poundin' keys shit has been used before, this was a decent flip though.. Our rankings tell the story.. your punches were pourin, but killed Cause I can drop this quarter.. just by using a quarter of my skill this was pretty average.. And SunU invited you to E Style.. but now we see Will's fucked Cause loyalty to the squad doesn't mean SHIT when you still suck lol, simplistic diss....nothing creative but still effective.. Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment Lol, this was cool...and quite a fresh way of using the tournament name for a punch.. I'm ranked as one of the best.. while nothing that you say is art I'm beating this fag, TM.. while all he wants to do is trade marks decent enough nameplay.. And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match Lmao!!! dope personal...good way to finish.. FINAL VERDICT Ok, bare in mind this is feedback and not a vote because Mimesis and I seem to have some difference of opinions lately. But, this battle was decent enough that I decided to leave my two cents on it. It was close, closer than it should've been really and that is purely down to the fact that Mimesis didn't put his best efforts into this. Trey didn't either, but to be honest and most will agree that if Mimesis came full force he would've dominated this battle. Both had rather inconsistent verses, both had some average punches and a few weak ones, and both had a couple of dope punches that just made me think "DAMN!!" and laugh my ass off. Trey came stronge with the wordplay as he generally does, but some of his lines were stretched. That may be something you want to work on. Mimesis though, had them simplistic punches where he flips something so basic into a punch that makes you crack up. Examples would be the close line/clothesline punch and the one story punch, both those were nice. Also, his closer was probably the best punch of the battle. Trey's finger fuckin his ass punch was dope, and the NBA line was cool but other than that he really didn't have much that stood out. Overall I think Mimesis edged it with a bit more consistency and a few stronger punches than Trey. But still, it was a good battle nonetheless. So, if I could vote I would go with Mimesis......and not just because he said I can't vote either and this is some way of sucking up, lol. He edged this battle, Trey you're still getting better, just try and not stretch your lines so much. |
|||
01-19-06, 04:15 AM | #9 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
|
IP: 1A46 2126
Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth
The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's... ............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again vs. We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first While I decided to prewrite.. ..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match I like the one story line but felt is worded kinda off, like how you just randomly said you'd tell a story, other then that, this was a good battle, I judged kinda hard here, but uh, I got mim taking this by 1 quotable, and quotables don't tell the whole, all of Mimesis lines I didn't quote > All of TM's lines I didn't quote. v/mimesis
__________________
It's JTR, lyrical art
The towers aren't still standing but the pyramids are... |
||||
01-20-06, 01:31 AM | #10 | |||
I Hurt.
|
IP: 49B0 4F0B
Nice battle, but Trey prolly bit half his lines.
Vote - Mim |
|||
01-21-06, 12:46 PM | #11 | ||||||
hotshh!
|
IP: 888C 2BD4
Dude this is my house...when we spit in the Booth
The only reason i didnt Knock u through the Ceilin's... ............cuz i dont feel like fixin the roof Son I stay wit the flashy ho's...while u stay flashin men if he got shit up his sleeve,hes been finger fuckin his ass again vs. We planned to post Tuesday.. but I thought I'd let you test first While I decided to prewrite.. ..so I wouldn't see my lines in your next verse Now I'm just wasting my time.. I've been knowing you're burned a bit But damn, I KO, RV.. while you just say goodbye to the touranment And what the fuck was that.. I know I just finished tearin ya raps Chances are so stretched.. even your lines got prepared for the match v/ mimesis closer then i and probaly he thought it would be though props trey |
||||||
01-21-06, 11:06 PM | #12 | ||||
Moderator
|
IP: 2361 1E5E
Word. On to the next round.
|
||||
01-23-06, 12:43 AM | #13 | |||||||
|
IP: A0C8 44A9
Mimesis wins and advances.
|
|||||||
01-23-06, 12:46 AM | #14 | |||||||
|
IP: A0C8 44A9
This battle is closed.
|
|||||||
01-23-06, 12:47 AM | #15 | |||||||
|
IP: A0C8 44A9
Moved to closed battles.
|
|||||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|