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01-20-06, 08:13 PM
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I'm HD {An Introduction: HD Classic}
IP: 215F 8CED
If you’re in my vicinity, I suggest you leave quickly
My mental’s destructive frequently, & often guilty of lack of humility If at ground zero?, I suggest you run, or roll, and tuck Cause when I self destruct, I’m known ta Rock like Ruck Heinously demonic, heath deliverance when I vomit Heaven’s Demon a heathen demonstrating vernacular domination Spectacular abomination, tough as nails, mind locked, hard driven Verbal ability beyond living, my gifts ain’t God given I inertly pervert thee, sickness runs through out HD 50/50 Healthy Divine in and through out symmetry, With heated delivery, ill the use of similes and metaphors evenly I slay bull like the minator, who wanted more? Turn ya world upside down so you can properly hit the floor Contestants raise ya hands ta get lethal infections injected in ya glands fa fucking with this man Bitches fear flame spitters, I Hunt Dragons, lit matches quench my thirst At arenas I arrive driving a hearse, like a raging stampede wildly disperse My verse, insured to make it hurt, just doing my thing like masturbation Like the apocalypse I’m expected to bring Hell’s Damnation I’m Highly Dangerous as well as Heavenly Devilish, Heart’s Darker than licorice Emotionless, but when we meet Death and I always kiss, stay eternally pissed At high velocity dis, the illest dish, to any starving miss, HD never miss Award me the Cy Young; sickest spits cause malaria lace the lungs If you’re in my vicinity, I suggest you leave quickly My mental’s destructive frequently, & often guilty of lack of humility If at ground zero?, I suggest you run, or roll, and tuck Cause when I self destruct, I’m known ta Rock like Ruck I’m HD and the blind don’t want ta see me, naturally manipulate all in my trajectory Effortlessly, meaning helplessly, so let it be, like time there’s nothing stopping me More like space there nothing topping me, infinite, there’s no containing me I’ve mentally achieved mastery in the art of invisibility I have a lack of mobility; meaning your lyrics ain’t moving me But you’re feeling me, permanently cause your nerve endings are integrated within the fabrics of my under garments I keep the rhyme moving like evasive targets, extensive knowledge is held within Like the Pentagon, ancient pyramids, or the Vatican, so treat it like a telegram, tell a friend Amputate to lend a limb; I’m spirited so sing a hymn March to my own drum so get with them, there’s flames contained within my flem I was burning before I went down, like royalty there’s many jewels in this crown And again I’m Heaven’s Demon the autocratic Has-been Determined To terminate vermin, father villainous short men like Pee Wee Herman High profile secret identity like Bruce Wayne, the Missing Link is off the chain Stay potentially disastrous like supposedly dormant volcanoes When asked if I’m feeling ya flow, do like the DEA and “Just say No” If you’re in my vicinity, I suggest you leave quickly My mental’s destructive frequently, & often guilty of lack of humility If at ground zero?, I suggest you run, or roll, and tuck Cause when I self destruct, I’m known ta Rock like Ruck Hate Driven, here to alienate the living, only speak with my permission I’m a positive suspect, a Negetive Aspect, a War~God representative Ill with out a sedative, couldn’t be governed by the president I represent THH, in Hell I wouldn’t repent, studio time is like wish money, well spent Like pinhead I’m a torture specialist as well as hell sent Damn straight that’s where my wrath stem from, while Bone holla redrum I’m worth the umpteenth times my weight, half of you cats is dum-dums cause yall suckers I like women single and childless, I ain’t the mutha~fucka My prowist is limitless, even when I don’t take shits (UHHHH!!!) Pounds come with beatings, when face and fists have meetings I greeting, masses with the blunt force of my persona I’ll extract ya skeleton while ya body’s still quivering ta make you a donor Fuck your ideology the nigga you thought might be me, this is my personality Fuck the glory, love power, and rep with gory stories Catch it on the local news or watch Capone & Nore Like Marvin Lewis I’ve built the illest defense Skills immense, no pretense, I’ve always been like this Hip~Hop Dedicated, skills beyond rated, over comp I tower And there’s a minimum of 36 hundred seconds in an hour A maximum of 36 hundred and 59, I’ll give you half of that time ta shine The rest of ya life is mine, violate or try to break and there’s 60 seconds left in ya lifeline Replied to: At the end of the day & New Shit _______________________
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01-21-06, 12:30 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
Damn homie this was tight i was really feeling it..your feeling and emotions were on point..only thing that could be better is your structure..It really through me off..other then that you had lovely wordplay and vocab..and very good imagery nice job H.D
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01-21-06, 01:55 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 2029 97B3
now see thats wut im sayin i agree wit bonecollector and yet your shit set up exactly the way mine is as far as the structure but u couldnt take a few minutes and read it liek i did urs and give me honest feed on its content....no hatin jus sayin if u gonna say sumtin about my structure ur shit on point b4 u do peace rtf for reals this time...btw u remind me of me when i rhyme crazily...good drop overall peace
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01-21-06, 05:22 PM
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IP: 215F 8CED
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You're right I shoulda cleaned this up structurally... however I wrote this in 99 ... it's dumb old... I just use it as my introduction to any site I join... I'm alot more structurally sound now... and I did read your post all the way through before I commented... thankx for the feed uppin'
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01-22-06, 02:56 PM
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IP: 45F8 104E
dop epiece H.D flow was nice...really i don't fuck with text i would want to see this in a audio that would be dope.but nice drop
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01-24-06, 07:40 PM
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IP: 215F 8CED
thankx for the reply uppin'
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01-24-06, 09:47 PM
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IP: CF74 5D3A
this was nice text only but cats talking about audio no i don't think so lot over extended words you don't need all this vocab unless maybe you're writing to college scholars I'm willing to bet most these cats will never understand this piece at all it just flew right over their heads plus correct the structure for real hell why use all these politically corect words to say what mohammad ali said ("I'm a bad man) well keep on dropping this stuff for real
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