aight yo check out a lil sumthin from me if you like and want mo juss ask if not then dont worry,im really juss lookin for a crew so hit me up

Yo,anything you niggas try,I can do
If yo moms wonder why you die,its cuz you a fool
I aint tryin to beef wid noone,just a kid lookin for a crew
I know i aint da best in here
but when you go gainst me 1 on 1,im da kid you should fear
you dont wanna battle me,you frontin
You in the crib stuntin,Im on da block gunnin
Call me the mutha effin hitman,You underestimate me till I spit man
You a dummy kid,A effin class clown,funny kid
Murdering the alphabet while you sit back and listen
Try and run up on me,you'll come up missing

elevate or ur not goint to find a crew ur rhymed scheme is jacked structure too basic vocab no metas or wordplay elevate

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yup what willa sound.....ill sum it up overall - just go to a different rapsite cuz you already fucked up here

Man i guess I fucked up pretty big
Im even gettin dissed from a white kid
You tell me what I already know
Go back to you suburbs hoe
Ide be at another site if i cared
You just affraid of me,you scared
Come at me 1 on , I bet you'll be done
Give you 2 rounds,Straight kill you like PUN
you dissin on me but its cool,I think its fun

you couldnt possibly know hjow it sounds without hearin it so dont be to quick to dissin it

^actually i can picture those wack ass lines way to basic and so played out....like for real take our advice and elevate or stop rappin on this site ~1~