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02-06-06, 02:37 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
u just hating cus i didnt like ur shit.
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02-08-06, 02:30 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
post some feed u fuckin ppl!!!
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02-08-06, 04:03 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 215F 8CED
That's the course they used for the Superbowl commercials on NFL Network... but I fucked with it then and still fuck with it now... so on to the verses... the 1st verse was cool till the second half where the flow just derailed, and you used "I" way too much... your structure got sloppy right there too... On ya next couple verses it seemed like you kinda changed topics and started complaining about shit... it got a lil annoying I had to force myself to continue to read... Structurally the verses were sound but the content wasn't as polished as the 1st verse... the last verse you still complained a lil but it got a lot better content wise... over all this was an aight drop
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02-08-06, 08:12 PM
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-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
the hole point of this shit is that ppl know who i am mostly and wut i do. being freestyles. i kinda got out of the mood of finishing but none the less i had 2 so i did. the 1st verse is pretty much the intro. the second verse is like me and how much my verses have inproved and shit, 3rd verse is kinda the same and how i use my rhmyes and last but not least is the 4th verse which is me for the ppl, and wut i hear them say bout me and shit.
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02-08-06, 10:57 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yeah, i liked the first verse the best...last one, wasn't feeling it....but i have to say, this flows pretty well with the song...and its good for a key....hmm, i think you should not to a key next time, lets see what you got for real, nah saying?
but you are elevating, keep up my man
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