Remix of Eminem's If I Get Locked Up Tonite

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Will post soon...im gon til almost 12 am Eastern, ill post them once i get back...


LINK TO TRACK:

www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop

scroll until u see IF WE GET LOCKED UP TONITE (PSA REMIX)



leave feed, ill RTF

MOD's dont close this...my word ill have links posted once i get home

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how to ruine a classic lol,the reason why no one uses mainstream, starting with the hook, something he didnt do so prob to that?, anyway , first dude, nice flow, quality is so-so but good enough, the beat is illnest, i prefer the original like 11000494958 time haah werd, i cant hear nothing but nothing from the second dudes hook, maybe ill get better, yes it did, mmmm aint really feeling it:s hate his voice, quality is soso, try to not high pitch your voice that much, lyrics are okay,anyway dont really like the track, no hate

the chorus at the begginin wasnt realli that good....Trakk star has a Good rapping Voice but needs to get my Lyrical... not bad verse tho

as for Snypa i could u hear u Clearly...u sound like ur tryna be another eminem (No hate) but no one realli gets Violent now of dayz...its ok....ur good tho just work on it a lil bit...like speats said i like the original better then this sorry....keep tryn tho...

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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...380#post2648380

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i kno wut u guys are sayin, and i aint trynna be another eminem...if u listen, i didnt hit her, i was keepin her off of me and she fell....

but yea....obviously the original is better, they always are.....

i lke critisism like this...but speats...dont start by sayin we ruined a classic....dat jus aint rite.....but other than that....thx

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i think you guys messed up on the chorus.....trakk your voice is good for rappin....you got it just need to up yourself lyrically and raise up your skill level in lyrics....snypa, you were more clear but still need to up lyrically as well...overall this was descent, seen better from both

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