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02-13-06, 02:55 PM | #1 | |||||||
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What A Tragedy (Tragade Diss)
IP: 9CC5 0E86
A little bit i put together for this Tragade faggot who is so cocky that he wont even reply to me or trakk star.....
so im flowing acopella on this one....cuz this faggot cant flow on a beat so im givin him some breathin room.....lmao LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2655597 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2655600 LINK TO TRACK: www.soundclick.com/snypaakarooftop called: What A Tragedy leave feed, ill RTF
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02-13-06, 03:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
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didnt want a beat.....jus wrote and recorded it....but i kno wut u mean
uppin
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02-13-06, 05:49 PM | #4 | |||||||
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bbbbuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmpppppppppp
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02-13-06, 07:37 PM | #5 | |||||||
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not really feelin the intro.....lyrics are pretty good...needs a beat....that's the only thing i would say...good diss accapella though....but i woulda liked it betta if it had a beat with it....overall i'd give it a 7/10
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02-13-06, 08:48 PM | #6 | |||||||
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koo thanks....uppin
besides beats...i want feed about the verse.... i kno it could use a beat...but i want feed about the verse now
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02-14-06, 06:37 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 3E18 C2E9
Alright You Want Feed About Your Verse
The Intro Took Too Long Personally Though The Actual Lyrics Were Nice,Had Some Good Punchlines Lol@The Erect Line,Your Emotion Was Koo,One Thing Though...Try And Work On Your Breath Control A Lil....You Seem Confident Enough...Although I Felt The Presence Dipped In A Few Places,Try Work On That Dawg,You Seemed Agressive,Which Was Good For A Diss Track...Like You Really Meant It,Nah Mean?,The Delivery As I Said Was Agressive,But Try And Get This On All Of Your Tracks Cause I Heard Some Others..If You Get Everything Like This,Your Set....The FLow Was Good,Even Without A Beat,It Was Like Each Line Was The Same N Shit, Overall Good Shit...I Think Its A Lil Weird Without A Beat...But It Doesnt Ruin The Track..Its Actually Quite Good Keep Up!
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02-14-06, 07:16 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: A7C1 221B
this intro is gay, u actually do sound like a gay guy haha... stop the intro man, this is lame.... this intro is fuckin terrible, stfu allready u best be sick..... delivery is ok, flow is cool, sum good lines then a bunch of pointless shit, ur breath control was off, kinda all over the place really... decent shit, but its acapella, so ur delivery needs to make up for lack of beat so think bout that for next time cos this was a boring listen tbh.
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