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03-20-06, 04:39 PM | #1 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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Trails Of Ink
IP: B910 5651
Glouds Gather To Batter My Feelings...
....Into An Emotional Clashin. Stagger For Daggers Feed To My Grievin... ....Which Crawls In A Witherin Fashion. Glittered In The Memories I've Beheld... ...In A Well Clustered With Tears Of Ink. Feeling A Roses Thorns, My Love Swells... ...To Affection. I Sigh, Take A Second And Blink. Regain Consience To These Painful Cuts ....Dwellin In The Midst Of My Imagination. For The Rose I Watered Will Soon Errupt... ...Rise Past Our First Kiss At Graduation. So I Sit On A Wooden Chair Sheddin Tears.. ...For The Fear Of A Mear Crack In True Love. Has Fallen On My Witherin Heart As The Shear... ...Truth. It's A Feeling I Apparently Never Knew Of. For My Tears Have Fallen And A Trail Is Marked... ...Over The Vanishin Connection We Shared. The Flame Lost In The Dark, A Flickerin Spark... ....Shows The Beauty Of Our Love Is Still Spared. |
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03-20-06, 11:21 PM | #2 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: B910 5651
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03-21-06, 10:11 AM | #3 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: B910 5651
uppin for feed.
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03-21-06, 01:51 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 8A05 210E
damn nucca dat was a nice joint here alot of wordplay, multis, great vocab, structure was easy 2 follow, & i like ya whole style in diz 1 here keep doin ya thang
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03-21-06, 01:57 PM | #5 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: B910 5651
thanks for the feedback homie............
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03-21-06, 10:03 PM | #6 | ||||
I Chill in Asylums
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IP: 2D8D 8897
This was nice man, defenitely a nice drop. The vocab and multies were nice, and it flowed well. I also liked how u structured it too. Nice drop man, please rtf on My Mind. Thanks and Peace.
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03-21-06, 11:46 PM | #7 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: B910 5651
thanks for the feedback fam............
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