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04-06-06, 02:08 PM
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The Alien Toung
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Decap Ft Darian Jones and M.I
IP: 7996 9D6E
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3752522
^^ Decap w the new head !!! darian Jones get to know em !!!! 1st verse - me 2nd darian 3rd M.I links------------------------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225811 the q controlled violence http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2711184 j.d. guaranteed to suck
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04-08-06, 06:28 AM
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IP: 6446 9F76
Listenin'....king of movie samples puts a good one there...I think how it goes str8 into youre verse is good...I really dont like the beat but ure ridin it real good..and youre lyrics are good too...work on da breath control tho, kinda runnin out, flow is nice...2nd dude...kinda sounds bored...but got that gangsta vibe flow is pretty sick..aint heard of him before...lyrics are eh...the next guy allotta energy ...multis are decent..flow is okay but this type of joint aint my type but this is nice..1
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04-08-06, 03:23 PM
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IP: 46E3 3347
1st MC- nice flow ridin beat real well, delivery is strate, different from most MCs.......
2nd MC - nice voice for this topic, nice lyrics for the song 3rd MC - good contrast from the 2nd MC , 2nd MC wuz more laidback, but this MC is much more hype...flow and all that is strate....... pz ~1~
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04-08-06, 04:12 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
your style is really different man....it seems a lil rushed in this song.....i unno, ive heard alot better stuff from you.....maybe at the begning, fade in the beat a lil bit during the end of your movie sample....cuz with you jumping right in it feels a lil suddden....just a personal opinion....its pretty good... but not one of your best.....
the second guy....i dunno sounded good nothing standed out to me....i dunno nothin that special but didnt sound bad last guy good...only thing to work on is breath control...i hear mad deep breaths in some parts....otherwise, not good, not bad, just another run of the mill track....i know all yall can do better so im not giving full props...but i will say this didnt suck by any means...it just wasnt to the best of your abilities
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04-08-06, 04:30 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
thx buddy nice to see some honest feed.......................
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